The main objective of education is to procure a job

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The main objective of education is to procure a job

The main aim for parents to send their infants to school is not only to study but for overall development of the kid.Procuring a job in life one of part of the life and the whole life.I partially agree with the claim.

The main aim for children to attend a school is improve not only on educational front but other domains too.There other domains where a person learns skills which are not taught by anyone but a person learns with experiences.The prime example of it is building a strong relationships with other people,be it a classmate,school bus driver or even the school clerks.These types of relationship buidling skills help the child throughout his life.Social conduct or manners is also very important in life.It potrait's the person's image and personality.''First impressions is the last impression''.This skill is not only required for a job interview but also in day-to-day life.

How to you speak to other people,the way you speak to other people also matters a lot.Respecting the other person's privacy and not insulting the person is also important.There are vairous skills that we can talk about that a child should acquire for school or colleges.Procuring a job does mean that the person's life is completed or he has achieved everything in his life.One of prime example recently doctors have discovered that the people who only focus on their career and do not give time to develop a hobby or do not excersize on a daliy basis,suffer with depression or aniexty attacks.

Education should be looked at as a all round development rather than the sole aim of procure a job.To survive in this world education is needed.For a job you need have a certain qualification and studying also helps in developing skills like consistency,hard-working,problem solving skills,etc.A person with high paying salary job has access to a vairous privelliges.But all the top ceo's of facebook,tesla,etc have said being happy and keeping you family and friends is the most important thing in life.

In conclusion, I would say a person's overall development is benifical for him and the people around him infact the for whole society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1104815864 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46777850008 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529745042493 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.252800219 60.3974514979 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 360.8 118.986275619 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.6 23.4991977007 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155656364436 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089134583109 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642906872882 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089134583109 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642906872882 0.0667264976115 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.9 14.1392134831 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 48.8420337079 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 12.1743820225 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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