People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Society is an amalgamation of people with different attitudes. And It is not necessary that immediate situation or surrounding causes the change in people’s attitude. Society as a whole actually directs our attitude towards other people’s behaviour, actions, thoughts they put up. Society has norms, ethics which are created from a long process of evolution and adaptation.
To further explain this point, consider the two different societies of different cultures, one from the western side of the world and one from the east side of the world. Say America and Pakistan. Where people in America support open and free world, Whereas some people in Pakistan who live under extremist society less believe in an open and free world. It’s the difference between the two societies which influences people‘s attitude.
Consider the example of reviews, we have seen a sudden rise in websites which posts review about different things, like movies, product etc. This is because people get influenced by an opinion of other people before trying out something they go with which has good reviews. In this scenario, no situation or surrounding is influencing the attitude of that person towards something it is the society which affects one’s thought process.
In conclusion, It is not necessary that situation or surrounding will affect the attitude of people even if it does it will be a very small fraction of what society does as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2735042735 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80971775152 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1032765501 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2598532913 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104224252468 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788106739423 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181339272805 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775461116073 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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