People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In my understanding, the behavior of human being is the response of people to any action, or the character of any human being influenced by the environment around. In the statement above, the author raise the issue that the behavior of anyone is largely determined by the external force rather than their own making. Indisputably, some might argue that human habit and emotions are sometime not under the control of the environment. However, such characters are founded and influenced by the environment around him or her. I strongly agree with the opinion of the author that external forces are largely responsible for the determination of the people’s behavior.
Being the social animal, human being are always force to follow the norms and values created by the society. Society is a group of people living together with common values and lifestyle. For example, in Muslim religion, there are rules and regulation for human being. The society guide to a person’s behavior. One is not allow to wear the dresses of his or her own wish. Girls are always force to cover their face with their traditional cloths. In such a society, we can clearly see the people’s action are not done by their will but the society in which people are living and also their descendent will follow them similarly. In this circumstances, obviously people are always limited to the norm and values. They are guided by the strict rules and regulation. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that the external forces determine the behavior of the people.
Furthermore, since the birth behavior of human being are under the control. As an example, in some Asian country, when a child is born, he or she is always under the monitor of mother until he or she grows up. Once he or she has grown up, society is always around him which bind him and teaches the tradition and culture. Tradition and culture refer to the common activities based on which people in the society live. In such a cases, a person’s behavior are always under the judgement. Such a lifestyle has been practiced in Asian country as per my personnel experience, I can clearly see that behavior is mostly determined by the external factors.
Admittedly, when it comes to emotion, emotion are not able to control by the external forces. However, when we talk about the maximum character of human, external forces like the environment, society, norms and traditions are always responsible.
In conclusion, although few characters or behavior are determined by the external factors. Most of the characters are influence by the surrounding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forced'.
Suggestion: forced
...e social animal, human being are always force to follow the norms and values created ...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...al animal, human being are always force to follow the norms and values created by the soc...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
...to a person's behavior. One is not allow to wear the dresses of his or her own w...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wearing
...erson's behavior. One is not allow to wear the dresses of his or her own wish. Gir...
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Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...scendent will follow them similarly. In this circumstances, obviously people are alw...
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Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s determine the behavior of the people. Furthermore, since the birth behavior of...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a case' or simply 'cases'?
Suggestion: a case; cases
...ich people in the society live. In such a cases, a person's behavior are always un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03472222222 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82391374014 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453703703704 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1167469756 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.28 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202179200267 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601355958429 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666019611651 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10480071266 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738219539411 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.