According to the prompt, it states that person who done crime intentionally should not continue with his/her civil rights and should not provide any rights from their jobs. I mostly agree with the prompt for two main reason which i will elucidate below and also i do concede about that this is extreme in some cases which will be explained below.
To begin, If a person execute a crime wantedly then he should punished severely. This is because providing punishment to people who done it knowingly prevent similar person in do the same. For example, Terrorist are those who commit crime which has a huge impact in society, so government so provide punishment in such a way it prevents similar idea people to do the same.
Moreover, Civil right are the basic things one should have in his/her country so prohibiting his/her rights is an great penalty for their crime. For example, if a person is prohibited in their own country by not holding their rights , they wont have any basic qualities of citizenship
Finally, i do concede it will be extreme in some cases. For example, we cannot compare a terrorist and a guy how commits a crime because of the ego he had on the other individual with same punishment. so holding back their civil rights is extreme in some of the cases. it should be clear to whom is the punishment applicable It cannot be provide to all the persons who commit are crime intentionally
To conclude, i do agree with the prompt for the two reason outlined above, But i do concede it cannot be same in all cases. So the impact of the crime examine before giving the justice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ishment to people who done it knowingly prevent similar person in do the same. For exam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in all cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6514084507 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4860831479 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468309859155 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2166089163 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294420872537 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128990496478 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116535457843 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165541113221 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904102477758 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.