A Ultimate motive of a nation is to treat theirs citizen equally Providing equal stand of education is one of the way so that the nation will have better citizen tommorow. According to the prompt, it states that until college every student should have a same stranded curriculum. I Strongly agree with this statement for two reasons Which is be outlined below.
To begin, Providing a standard curriculum for everyone gives a uniform stand of education to all student. For instance, many argue that Curriculum 'A' is easier that Curriculum "B" and also during college admission process student are scaled according to their marks in high school rather than their education curriculum. For example, it may be curriculum Bis really tough than Curriculum 'A' So student from the B will have less percentage in getting into the first tier college
Moreover, Students can easly transfer into other schools inspite of their respective curriculum. For example, if a student want to transfer their school due to their family situations he/she can easily change their school without considering their respective stream of education. In addition, this also gives a way for the student who are getting transfer not to get into low grade school than their pervious one because of their curriculum as an factor
Many may argue if curriculum is made uniform is also make student's carrier uniform? Mostly making a curriculum standard it makes everyone from different family background to study at same level. So that student carrier is not spoiled by their family financial status.
To conclude I argue that a standard nation curriculum should implement to student to study for the above two reasons. But i do conceded to implementation can cause wave in political aspect since this will affect many private institution
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
A Ultimate motive of a nation is to treat...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...this statement for two reasons Which is be outlined below. To begin, Providing ...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ious one because of their curriculum as an factor Many may argue if curriculum ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...use of their curriculum as an factor Many may argue if curriculum is made uniform is ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...e if curriculum is made uniform is also make students carrier uniform? Mostly making...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mily background to study at same level. So that student carrier is not spoiled by their...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to study for the above two reasons. But i do conceded to implementation can cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17627118644 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70317251132 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5675493734 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246120115837 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107158320671 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875527057201 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148274932644 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555336702929 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.