Poverty and unemployment are considered as global issues. While arts such as music, cinematography, paintings and such are quite important for the nation’s economy, tourism, and diplomatic development since it represents the values, culture and the expression of the nation. But considering that poverty and unemployment are problems with much more significance, the nation should suspend it’s funding for the art in significant numbers.
Poverty is an issue that is inter-related to unemployment. A person who is unemployed will not have a means to indulge himself even with even the basic necessities. What we consider as a normal meal might even be a luxury for him or her. I have once met an unemployed person who only eats two meals a day, and sometimes even just plain rice or bread to save on money. He was trying his best to get a job, while working part-time to alleviate his situation, but the government did not provide him with any sort of help to lessen his dire.
Both poverty and unemployment could also have a significant effect on both the morale and the economy of the nation. Since the country’s citizens are unemployed, it would have the responsibility to provide aid for those who are jobless. And also come up with schemes to soothe the suffering of those who are hungry, which would again require the government to spend money. Thus, both of these issues would have a direct impact on the country’s morale and economy.
Unemployment is an issue that could affect not just the individual, but the whole family. The jobless person’s basic necessities will have to be taken care of by their closed ones. For instance, a person who took education loan to study but couldn’t find work, can have an effect on the whole family. Since the government won’t help that person cover their student loan, the burden would then naturally fall on his or her relatives.
Poverty is just as severe an issue, which would have an impact on the whole family. Not eating nutritious food on the right time, in the right amounts, could lead to health impairment. The burden of medical charges is somethings that has to be carried by his intimate ones, when the whole family is already in a situation where they can’t even afford proper food.
Despite the significance art holds on the nation’s economy, tourism and diplomatic development, I still believe that poverty and unemployment are problems with much more importance. Considering that hunger and joblessness are issues that could affect both the morale and the economy of the nation along with the individual himself and his family, the nation should cut-down it’s fundings on art related and instead invest that money to provide more job opportunities to it’s citizens and also come up with solutions to alleviate the nation’s poverty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...s to indulge himself even with even the basic necessities. What we consider as a normal meal migh...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... the whole family. The jobless person’s basic necessities will have to be taken care of by their ...
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Line 11, column 468, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'to its citizens'?
Suggestion: to its citizens
...money to provide more job opportunities to it’s citizens and also come up with solutions to alle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for instance, sort of, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7706314916 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47983014862 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1950317712 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186610337175 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561108329325 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592133962363 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101046631211 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630915504459 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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