People are inherently complainant, who prone to complain about the restrictions surrounding them implying those are preventing them to act with freedom. Is that truth? From my point of view, it’s just an usual character of a person not to accept his irregularities. Additionally, the acts of a person play the preventive role to circumscribe his freedom. So, I strongly agree with the above assertion.
To start off, every people has his own habits and attitudes according which he acts. Humans create the society for their own benefit and confined with various rules and regulations. Those very rules and regulations, imposed by the humans consequently prevent them to perform to the way they wish. For instance, drinking is prohibitive in many countries, and this prohibition has been imposed by a group of legislatures. Those legislatures, undoubtedly the members of that society where people live, who like to drink. However, they can’t because of that prohibition. So, that’s something that surely against their freedom, whereas, many countries have legalized drinking.
Similarly, a person is directly enforcing prevention on his freedom in some cases. Where, that person is engaged to pursue his own interest letting the freedom to be vanished. Consider, for the example, a business, who most of the time of the day thinks about how to expand his own business. He expends his time in meeting, castigating his employees, going abroad to deal with new customers only to expand the very business, nothing else. In the meantime, there are other sorts of things related to life that need focus, that admittedly need time. But, what is that business doing? He merely things about his free time that can be spent to refresh him, entertain him, elsewhere those are the very need of a human being, otherwise a human being is no less than a robot. So, it is clear that the businessman is constraining his freedom only with help of his habits and attitudes.
However, there are some exceptions, where a person can rarely act considering his freedom. During those particular moments a person’s move is determined by others, restricting his very own freedom. The time of natural disaster can be taken into account to describe the former scenario. A person might thing to meander through the town, while a scale 5 tornado is tormenting everything is it’s way. However, his move will definitely be suppress by someone only to keep that person safe.
To sum, getting inured to the habits and attitudes, a person is resisting himself to savor the act of freedom. But, it’s not mandatory that the former claim must always be true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...revention on his freedom in some cases. Where, that person is engaged to pursue his o...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...e. But, what is that business doing? He merely things about his free time that can be spent t...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tornado' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tornadoes', 'tornados'.
Suggestion: tornadoes; tornados
...ander through the town, while a scale 5 tornado is tormenting everything is it's w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11009174312 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83973112979 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543577981651 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7850542619 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5185185185 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1481481481 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277900489795 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779373971635 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795062453454 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175826729 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622141207899 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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