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Controversial topics are always interested to debate, although, it depends how sound your opponent and you are with the topic. It is true that, believes are build with time, and can not be changed instantly, however there is always a chance that other party shall agree with the thought, later or at the same time, depending about the level of understanding others are having. Therefore, I would always consider to discuss the controversial topics which is helpful to look at the other side of the paper.
First thing first, as we all know that human brains are designed in a way that it always resist wrong, however, we have developed or trained our mind in such a way that it starts accepting wrong as a right or making it more lucid, it starts avoiding. But somehow, there is always a space to fix the thought in such mind-set.
For such topics, ethics and the way how to transfer your thoughts are always play an important role. Discussing such topics can broaden your way of thinking and enhance your understanding level. Let's take an example for the sake of an argument, if my brother has a core belief that fire cannot harm him, and he is running towards it, what shall I do? Despite of knowing, that he will be hurt badly because of the fire, shouldn't I stop him? I should stop him, once, twice and as many times as I can. Might be there is a chance that he will understand and can be saved. In other words, if I am not going to do that he will get injured or burn himself completely.
In continuation with the above example, I would always suggest to discuss the controversial topics. But , we should be cautious with the way of talking in other words topic is not an issue, how it is said, is the one.
Nevertheless, you can change someone's mindset easily with good and quality speaking capabilities.
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| 2019-10-16 | aliabbassamie | 16 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider discussing'.
Suggestion: consider discussing
...s are having. Therefore, I would always consider to discuss the controversial topics which is helpf...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...ow to transfer your thoughts are always play an important role. Discussing such topi...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...g and enhance your understanding level. Lets take an example for the sake of an argu...
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Line 9, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...will be hurt badly because of the fire, shouldnt I stop him? I should stop him, once, tw...
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Line 13, column 56, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest discussing'.
Suggestion: suggest discussing
... with the above example, I would always suggest to discuss the controversial topics. But , we shou...
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Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to discuss the controversial topics. But , we should be cautious with the way of t...
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Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'words'' or 'word's'?
Suggestion: words'; word's
...utious with the way of talking in other words topic is not an issue, how it is said, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57012195122 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53020116638 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2848311912 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0223274155657 0.243740707755 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0070078920643 0.0831039109588 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0151929147189 0.0758088955206 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00958302116072 0.150359130593 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125618992767 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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