Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
It is highly important to understand the category of problems, we are assuming to be solved by science and technology, perhaps I would oppose this statement by using the phrase "Knowledge is a curse".
While looking around, it can be clearly analyzed that the society's problem has drastically increased due to the advancement in science and specially technology, today. Lets analyze the important three problems society are facing; unemployment, social life & health.
Evidence are there which shows that, how advancement in technology increased the unemployment rate. Opportunities are minimized to its lowest, and human replacement has been achieved through the machines. Because of this, a huge sector of the society is living under the poverty line and striving to meet their daily needs. On the other hand, the group of people who is somehow managed to run in this race has affected their social life and health. To understand this argument, lets take a small and simple example of internet or social websites: People are physically present with their family, friends and other society members but mentally they are at a place which does not even exist. Technology has mesmerized the users in such a way that they are unable to identify the outcomes and affects, causing because of it. We humans become so much dependent to the science and technology, that we are unable to identify the cons, in a result we are ruining our health and becoming weary and lethargic
In conclusion I would draw all attention towards the fulcrum law, which I read in my early physics - human hands are the worst type of fulcrum because the applied effort in terms of work done is very poor. Therefore, they always find the easiest way to solve the problems, however, later they analyzed the loss due to these advancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...cience and specially technology, today. Lets analyze the important three problems so...
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Line 13, column 319, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'these advancements'?
Suggestion: this advancement; these advancements
...er, later they analyzed the loss due to these advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 301.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07973421927 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74189305778 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3124161076 57.8364921388 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17672168467 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598350903443 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593951663298 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116291751766 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625748125887 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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