Requiring university students to take a variety of courses outside their major fields of study is the best way to ensure that students become truly educated
Education plays an important role in ones life. Many students tend to do a lot of research and select their majors carefully as major firld in the university will shape their future. The prompt states that university students ought to choose variety of courses outside their major fields to become truly educated. However, this is a bit complicated to say that courses other than the major is the best way to be truly educated. Considering this approach as the best way is a wrong method to analyze a student’s education.
Courses outside the major field will only provide knowledge in other fields, that cannot be termed as being truly educated. For example, if a student chose computer science as his major and biotechnology as his elective, this can only provide information regarding the elements included in the biotechnology rather than saying that the individual is truly educated
An individual is said to be truly educated, only if he applies the techniques which he learned in his everyday life. For instance, if a student takes history as his major field of study and chooses many other fields but not mathematics or any languages. He will not be able to do basic calculations necessary for his day to day life and will not be able to communicate his ideas effectively. Minimal education is necessary to survive in today’s world.
Courses that are outside the majors can be useful if they want to shift their focus in the future. For example, a person who studies both computer science and mechanical can use his knowledge from both the fields which will help in building various automation programs like the student can build a chatbot by training a bot
To conclude, education cannot be termed only based on the courses taken by a student. Rather, an individual is said to be truly educated when he/she applies all the values and the knowledge in the real life.
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- Argument 58
- Requiring university students to take a variety of courses outside their major fields of study is the best way to ensure that students become truly educated 50
- There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts especially at a great cost in money and jobs to save endangered animal or plant species 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Education plays an important role in ones life. Many students tend to do a lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89096573209 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66913662652 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479750778816 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9884029542 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379880220802 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152848186916 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115605353048 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2161364083 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133780890118 0.0667264976115 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.