Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
The issue brought into attention by the author is a classic case of casualty where he attributes the necessity of scandals to address certain issues pertaining to the society which a reformer often fails to notice and often brings in fresh perspective that is not quotidian to these reformers . This interpretation of author seems quite befitting to a greater extent as the scandals often uncover the deep secrets of the seemingly jolly politicians in the public forum which makes the public to reconsider their attitude and finally their decision in concern to the politician in question.
The scandals do certainly tarnish the image of the politician which hints one to the unhidden aspect of the governance which tenacious reformers do slip to notice . Such scandals at the same time do create a situation of turbulence in the working of the government which often shakes the economy and as a result many people indirectly get affected apart from the politician which is the negative aspect of these scandals . Various examples can be presented to elucidate the effectiveness of scandals in bring a major reform but these do come at a certain cost .
As an example of the 2G scam that surfaced in 2008 has certainly tarnished the image of the then prime minister Dr. Manmohan Singh but at the same time has brought the issue of hegemonised working of the government into light which made citizens to take an informed decision in the 2014 national elections . So in a similar way verious other scams like Coal Gate scams and VYAPAM scam have certainly made a positive impact in reforming the governance but such scams donot surface oftenly which even reformers at times tend to hide in an attempt to make personal gains .
A slighty different example pertaining to film industry, where various scandals of the renowned film actors has affected their money incurring aspect but at the same time has informed citizens to make wise choices pertaining to their own money as evident from the various scandals in Bollywood that surfaced the industry's connection with the under world has certainly hinted people to track upto the roots of the money they spend to watch these movies.
In concluding this essay , I would like to make a remark that the issue put forth by the author certainly has a concrete foundation which if backed by more prominent reasons can prove to be rock solid case to rasie an issue and get audience's vote.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than 42
- A true university education encompasses far more than the narrow, specialized study of a single discipline. Only through exploring the broad spectrum of liberal arts courses can students become truly learned. 50
- The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones."In order to relieve Briggsville’s notorious traffic congestion, Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi-million dollar subway system. The subway will run through 55
- Teachers' salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developi 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95133819951 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62291854638 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2944066306 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 226.111111111 118.986275619 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 23.4991977007 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095576096665 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046219519504 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311698849268 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509561526249 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302274613195 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 14.1392134831 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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