Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Author's claim that the people who tend to get on with their ideas despite of critism leads to a lasting legacy seems to be apt in certain situations which may some time not be true as one often need active criticism to develop on his ideas and come up with something amusing and interesting.But at the same time, one's willingness to take on the ideas also plays a critical role in his successful career.
As claimed by the author "Those who see their ideas through", doesn't seem to be the only cause responsible for a successful career as one's ability to bring his/her idea into a being is also needed in order to leave a lasting legacy. Often people misunderstand and consider this aspect alone and start their carrier which often leads them to leave the idea on which they tend to work and move on. An appropriate mixture of both aspects is required to reach success in a career . Alas, one more aspect plays a significant role in one's success that how he/she gets on with the criticism which often points out the loopholes in the prevailing idea so that one can develop it further.
In the question statement as stated by the author, Ignoring the criticism may not prove to be a good option as such active criticism from others often let's one to ponder upto is initial idea and look for any improvements in it. Sometimes it proves to be helpful in ignoring the criticism but it direction certainly leads to development in specified direction but it may not lead one to success. Ignoring the criticism often leads one to a completely known landscape but at the same time overlooks the landscape to which others expect one to go and thus hinders success as it is a social construct which often depends on the perception of others.
In conclusion, according to my opinion in order to assure success one has to ensure the aspects as discussed by the author but this alone can never account for a successful career as other aspects often play a significant role in one's journey to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65633802817 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63146181358 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484507042254 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0234237362 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.666666667 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4444444444 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252109031479 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113071181693 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614316549309 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161673584019 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691212827376 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 14.1392134831 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.