Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them early age to develop their talents.
Talented children are the pride of a nation. In fact, it is not easy that every gifted child gets identified and helped to develop their talents. The prompt recommends that society should identify and provide training for talented children at an early age. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that gifted kids should be considered as a gift and be helped to progress forward and develop more their talents for two reasons.
Firstly, practicing a skill where they are a master gives a person a good feeling that reflects for families and communities around them. Thus, people can enjoy these in the form of shows, races or exhibitions. For example, a child that plays piano and is very good at it, gives satisfaction to people around him /her. Consequently, the teachers, parents encourage this child to keep playing and showing his/her talent. However, not every child wants to be identified for some reasons like shyness, economic problems etc. The above example illustrates how important is developing a talent in a child’s life because it keeps them busy, away from electronics and adds skills for them.
Secondly, even if we assume that not many children have talents because they do not need them, one should pursue his/her dreams. For example, if someone thinks that is skilled more in one field than the others, it is possible to shine with help and training. Research has shown that societies that give chances are likely to progress and flourish. In other words, this is a rewarding experience that comes back as honor and pride for that society. Thus, governments should give their contribution and recognize the effort they should put on developing and cheering these talents.
In conclusion, talents are part of the culture and they enrich it, if they get identified and trained in order to develop more. Every nation profits by getting acknowledgeable because of these talents.
- Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them early age to develop their talents 50
- Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance 66
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.021875 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59143533768 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8738755735 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37705618931 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115069332809 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116571013317 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22422489165 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112526905412 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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