People have different opinions toward each other regarding successful leaders’ criteria. One group believes that a leader should be highly competitive in government, industry, or other fields to succeed. However, others argue that he or she should be collaborative with others. I mostly align with the second group for two reasons: collaboration brings various perspectives and mutual advantages. Nevertheless, I do concede that, in some cases, being competitive can motivate leaders to succeed.
First of all, cooperation can bring different points of view on a specific project. These various opinions can be productive as they view one subject from many angles. Otherwise, a person, even one not narrow-minded, could see only from one side and subsequently assumes that he will be successful if he follows his path, which most probably leads to failure. Moreover, collaboration with others brings different skillful people around the table. As people are not perfect, they mostly lack some skills or sufficient knowledge in one case; on the other hand, others have more experience in this subject. They can act as a complimentary and resolve others’ difficulties. Therefore, collaboration can lead to success for a leader due to bringing various opinions and skills into one place.
Secondly, cooperation can improve and promote a healthy relationships with others. For instance, an independent nation may face some dilemmas due to geographic restrictions. In this case, foreign policies play an essential role by initiating the export and import of goods between two countries. This approach can be beneficial for both nations as it helps fulfill their promises in developing countries. Furthermore, a leader can promote their country by working with another nation and reaching an agreement. For instance, one goal of some countries is to expand their visa-free territory to ease the application procedure and encourage more people to visit their country. This can be one goal for a leader if he wishes to promote their culture or earn money from tourists. Hence, collaboration can be considered a requirement for a successful leader.
However, in some cases, competition can motivate a leader to work harder than usual to bet others. For example, the industry can see other organizations and set a goal in order to reach or even supersede them. This approach could arise from differences in prices, innovations, and other tasks. By searching for different ways to earn these aspects, a leader can be motivated to work around the clock and set a goal. In addition, even if this competition ends with a failure, a leader acquires new skills and a set of mind to restart the combat. Finally, this healthy competition drives a leader to be able to overcome difficulties in different stages of his leadership. Thus, in limited cases, competition can be Benefield as it encourages the leader to try harder.
In conclusion, a successful leader should regard collaboration as a necessity as it brings various opinions, skills, and mutual benefits. Nonetheless, healthy competition can be productive for a leader to be successful.
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- Some people argue that successful leaders in government industry or other fields must be highly competitive Other people claim that in order to be successful a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...ation can improve and promote a healthy relationships with others. For instance, an independ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2754.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 498.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53012048193 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26736384896 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9647518847 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374606390516 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120140378909 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077893214781 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248841987697 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08500904319 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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