Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Choosing a field of study is a life changing decision. So, many students hesitate whether to follow their own talents and interest or to choose a field that has high demand in job market. Some holds that students should only consider their talents on the other side some believes that finding a job is most considerable. In fact, I personally believe that students should consider only their own talents and interest rather that availability of jobs.
One will never regret on choosing the talented or interested field of study as it gives a life-time satisfaction. It can be easier to study the interested field. One can have a better understanding in their favorite field of subject rather than only memorizing boring knowledge. If one can work on interested and talented field, one will get satisfaction of one's dream, which is more valuable than money. Also, all profession appreciate the talented one.
If students chose a field of study on the basis of availability of jobs then it might be possible that they are not interested in that field. If a person is not interested in a studying field and he graduated from that field. Then even if he continues to work in that field , it is not possible to achieve more performance. His performance on that job is not excellent, that leads to less salary and depression and disappointment in his life. Also, availability of jobs is unpredictable. If one field is in high demand in the present then it may have less demand after some years. So, choosing the field of study on the basis of availability of jobs is worthless.
If talented people work in their talented field then something great will happen. If talented students do not follow their interest field, not talented students will enter in that field and that will lead to waste of the talent. It reflects on society and the development of the world. Talented people utilize their talents then development of their field is possible and progression of the world will occur.
To conclude, students should choose their field of study on the basis of their talents and interests. It will help them to gain lifetime satisfaction and it helps human society. It is worthless for students to choose a field on the basis of availability but to forget their own happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85897435897 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78029230726 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397435897436 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4954913207 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3913043478 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.60869565217 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.564998695213 0.243740707755 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19625257849 0.0831039109588 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128315624733 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358901233453 0.150359130593 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12943642067 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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