Conservation of forests and natural habitat is necessary now-a-days. Rapid urbanization is leading to depletion of natural environment. Even if government has enforced laws for protection and conservation of environment, they are not being followed very seriously by the locals living near forests. Trees are being cut for monetary benefits and this leads to increase in air pollution and rise in percentage of carbon dioxide in the air. Those who believe that conservation of environment at the cost of human progress is unnecessary, do not consider the important role which environment plays in our ecosystem. Today, conservation of environment has become an important topic of discussion. I agree with those who believe that society must take efforts to preserve environment. But, an important point to consider is that there should be a balance between environment conservation and human progress.
In the mordernized society of today, people visit hill stations during their vacation. The reason is that they want to embrace peace with nature. But, if they do not put any effort in conserving the environment, they will not be able to embrace so called "peace". Once the environment is depleted, the consequences of it will be much greater than "cost of human progress" mentioned in the first sentence of this issue. But, this does not mean that everyone should start planting trees wherever they want. Conservation of environment should not hamper human progress in any way.
Activities like mining involve extraction of minerals from earth's crust. These minerals would surely be useful in science and technology industries. But extensive mining can lead to release of harmful gases and radioactive material in the environment around the mine. This release does happen through air. When this contaminated air is inhaled by a living organism, it is possible that he might get infected with some kind of cancerous disease. Hence, activities like mining should be carried out within a certain limit. Now, the question arises that who will define that "certain limit"? Well, it means that mining should be carried out to an extent such that it does not harm the surrounding environment.
Many industries require wood as a raw-material to make or build things. The wood is collected by rigorous cutting of trees. This will lead to destruction of forests on a large scale. An important question arises that how will these wood based industries run if they do not have the raw material needed for it? An answer to this question is that many alternative materials are being developed which can replace wood in near future. The industries should try to use the alternatives. Reducing the use of paper can surely lead to a start in the process of conservation of environment.
In conclusion, we should consider the fact that human progress is necessary and most important. But, this progress will not be of any use if it costs depletion of environment. Humans should consider maintaining a balance between their progress and conservation of environment. This balance will surely lead to a significant progress of mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 311, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'significant progress'.
Suggestion: significant progress
...nment. This balance will surely lead to a significant progress of mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 40.0 12.9106741573 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26534653465 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03584700254 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481188118812 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.534368237 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5757575758 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.303030303 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198876734611 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500826966634 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741455113725 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114204104794 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945830773926 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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