Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of arts.
Art is the field through which one can express or share his or her feelings regarding something. And the growth of the country depends on the iteration rate of people and other social and cultural aspects. Art has the power to make quixotic things real. Art plays the pivotal role in the research. Art can produce one of the income source for the country. Scientific research ascertained that one can learn quickly through observations. So, art can iterate people. Although publicly availability of art threatens it's safety which can be solved. Thus, I generally agree with the opinion that the government should provide the funding for the arts to make it publicly available.
Steve jobs said that "Those who are crazy enough to think different, they are the ones who can change the world". Artists see the world in ideosyncrasive way and make all days and nights one to convert their ideas in reality. For example, Burj Khalifa situated at Dubai ranks in the list of tallest buildings of the world reveals the idyllic model of art. Also, Taj Mahal situated at India comes in the world's seven eminent monuments, which is made up of only one stone before centuries.
Furthermore, most of recent researches are done on the sculptures and historical monuments to discover different facts. For example, Lothal situated at Gujarat is the village which discovers powerful town management of the "Harappa Culture". Ajanta - Ellora caves situated at India are famous for their portrait drawings in which all the paintings are painted with natural colours , before some years Indian Government noticed defects of colours so, they called the experts from all around the world but they were not able to solve the problem which shocked them.
"Old Is Gold" can become true with arts. Government can earn money through the sculptures and other artistic models by making publicly available in museums. Spiritual country like India has vast number of temples, mosques and holy places, those are the decorous places for meditations and peace of minds, which attract the foreigners. Narendra Modi, Prime Minister of India promoted handicraft business of Kutch, Gujarat which is famous in all over the world.
However, publicly availability of art can threatens it's safety. The chances of stealing of arts increase. But using the latest technology these all security related issues can be solved. And there is not any surety that the art will not be available to all then it is innocuous and the value of these arts are too high. Greedy nature of humans shows that when something good is happening for themselves then they don't think about others which cause to sell the painting and become opulent in one night.
So, on the basis of the supportive and analysing statements one can deduce lucidly that arts can increase the growth of the country and in the other way it is also hard to keep them safe. Therefore, the government should raise the funds for the arts to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all.
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 50
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of arts. 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01183431953 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55594155269 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1821720829 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18518518519 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348254249529 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111323049869 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112731368494 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197528137854 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140967883469 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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