There is a claim asserting that government officials must meet the will of the people in their state. Others oppose this view and believe that decisions, made by the authority, should depend on the government's own considerations. It is undeniably true that the government, elected by their people, should listen to their citizens and make policies as well as laws that must be beneficial to the people they serve. However, officials cannot be arbitrarily swayed by their citizens.
In the first place, responsibilities of the government are that the authority must defend society against unequality and discriminations, maintain our society to be harmonious and promote the development of the economy so that their people could live a happy life. There were many opposide examples where the people overthrew their governments without carrying out the sincere will of them. The British Empire imposed an inpersonal and inequal colonial rule on India. Gandhi was a national hero of India that he listened to the most general Indians, instead of the British government, and called for Indian people to implement the unviolent and uncooperation movements to fight against the cruel rule. Besides, Mandela broken the apartheid in South Africa and Martin Luther King Jr. promote the American civil rights movement. All those cases suggest that if government officials does not temperately listen to their people and they will confront a bad will from their people.
Secondly, carrying out the will from their people is significantly important for the leader of the government. For example, when Franklin D. Roosevelt ran for the president, America was experiencing an unprecedented financial crisis. Roosevelt watched out that the poor were live an unsustainable life in the crisis. Roosevelt made the New Deal, while faced criticism from conservitives, restored hope and self-respect to tens of millions of desperate people. Helping the poor in the Great Depression built a good reputation for him, and Roosevelt successfully served for four consecutive terms becoming one of the most great presidents in United States. It is significantly beneficial for leaders of governments when they carry out the will of the people their serve.
Last but not least, the authorities’ decisions cannot be totally controlled by the will of the people no matter those people support their governments or not. Officials should meticulously make any decision or plan because the people they rely might disregard the long-term benefits for short-term benefits. When an infectious disease breaks out, it is reasonable that the government tempararily shuts down schools, factories and companies and orders their citizens to stay at home for several weeks. But citizens want to go out of houses to eat delicious food or present a party which just leads to disease spread more quickly and fosters a worse situation. Officials’ decisions and plans should consider more the long-term benefits of their people rather than totally swayed by them.
In sum, the will of the people officials rely is liking water that can carry a boat. To continuously and safely lead a state, officials must reasonably listen to their people without controlled by the will for the short-term benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2752.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 516.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9084337434 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521317829457 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5705874674 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395390211691 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116900476297 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089856990814 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237176938361 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739026828581 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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