Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
During our lives we are constantly exposed to challenges and what makes a difference in improving or not ourselves is the approach we take for facing them. Seeing a challenging situation as an opportunity, whether it is for personal growth or for other aspects, is indeed the best way to face it and does not occupy too much the concentration a person needs in order to overcome it.
Just by considering the only aspect of improving ourselves, it is clear and of common knowledge that staying into the comfort zone does not improve a person's skills and does not produce a personal growth. Because of that, seeking to exit our comfort zone is mandatory if we want to increase our level on aspects of life that we do not like. This behaviour of seeking new and unpredictable things can prepare us to face any challenge we might encounter, thus increasing our possibilities of accomplishing the needed results.
Viewing a challenging situation as an opportunity is also extremely important for our motivation. If someone has no particular purpose to succeed in difficult activities and tries to do them just by focusing on their task, it is less likely for that person to achieve a good result. That person could instead give up at some point, due to the lack of a purpose. This especially happens when a challenge is spread in a long period of time, where special focus is needed and that focus mainly comes from motivation and determination.
Talking about what happens after a challenge has been overcomed, we can imagine how different approaches in facing it lead to different outcomes. A person that sees a purpose of personal growth in that situation is prone to be more satisfied and happy when the results have been achieved. Someone who does not have purpose in facing a challenge does not feel rewarded after what had to be done has been accompllished. That person is likely to feel as if that annoying event is finally gone, with nothing but stress in their veins. People with this approach are less likely to feel gratitude and satisfaction, thus conducting themselves in a more depressing life.
We can conclude by saying that an approach that sees purpose in facing challenging situations is indeed the best option for living a better life, with very little, when noticeable, negative effects. The improvement the person accomplishing the challenge feels, the motivation that pushes that person forward and the gratitude that comes at the end are all positive aspects of this approach, whereas someone who takes an approach without this purpose in mind does not benefit from all of these.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, thus, whereas, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90950226244 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8038858691 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7620758857 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320923943102 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111281722257 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941722389512 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197866007183 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873928316625 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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