Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The author states that some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise and others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. I believe that the public should always be in control of theirown fate and hence I would count myself amongst the former group of people. My stance is expounded with the help of the following points
I strongly believe that the fate of the entire nation should not be decided according to the principles and objectives of political leaders. I feel so because a nation is made of it's people and the entire future of these people should not be moulded according to the principle and objectives of a few politicians. These politicians are a representative of the nation and they were once a part of the crowd that they now represent. So these politicians should always accede to the publicopinion even if it comes at the price of the compromise on their own principle because they are supposed to represent the nations and not enforce their principles on the nation.
Apart from this, I believe that the people know what's best for them. They are the essence of the nation. The nation is where it is because of the people that make that nation. They live their life in that nation and hence they are able to draw distinctions on what is good and what is bad for them and for the nation. Most of these people are just what we call "common man" who are living their life in the nation so sure, they might need guidance sometimes to help them understand some situations better and that is where the politicians should come in to help bring the truth to the people and then let the nation decide for itself what is best rather than the politician remaining committed to particular principles and objectives. The power to decide their fate should always be with the people of the nation.
All that being said, I also have to acknowledge the fact that sometimes when the politician remains comitted to their principle and objectives, the nation might prosper under certain circumstances but this kind of situation can equally have the completely opposite result where the political leaders lead the nation to it's doom. But even considering the best case scenario, where the antion prospers wherethe political leaaders, the people will feel like they don't have a voice and that they don't ahve the liberty to decide what is best for them.
Therefore, considering different scenarios, I believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion as that is the way that the people are allowed to make decisions about their own lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, apart from, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85177453027 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61168017567 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417536534447 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.988270968 60.3974514979 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.933333333 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9333333333 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33404654249 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128092299774 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199841798538 0.0758088955206 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244274888983 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213006103458 0.0667264976115 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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