Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Being an effective leader is not a simple two sided coin, rather a spectrum in which every evaluation of effectiveness is a relative measure. The prompt says that in order to be effective, a political leader must listen to public opinion or remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. In my opinion, answer on how to be an effective political leader is not that simple. This passage explains the complexity of the topic in 3 reasons.
To begin with, The political leaders should yield or at least listen to the public opinion because by any decision or policy changes, people are the ones who are ultimately affected. For Instance, Let's assume that Political leaders of a city which is a major supplier of alcohol throughout the country introduce a ban on alcohol production overnight. The main source of income for people of that city is the export of alcohol products. Overnight ban of the alcohol product hindered the only source of income for the city and now people are out of job due to a single decision. The above example illustrates how a single decision of political leaders can make or break people's lives. Should the political leaders have listened to the people, there might have been some middle way out of this situation.
On the contrary, the political leaders are ones who are responsible for their decisions. Those decisions must be based on some necessity or for the welfare of the public itself. For Instance, Many countries ban sexually explicit content for all age groups. A survey among the people of those countries have found that 55 percent of the people do not see this as a good decision. While the rest 45 percent agree that this will be beneficial in the long term. This example illustrates that there are some decisions which political leaders have to take by themselves based on the long term impact of that decision on the people. This also shows that there are some topics in which the public will have mixed opinions but ultimately the political leader is the one who will be responsible for the decision
The answer to the question "Which leader is effective, the one who yields to public opinions or the one who consistently follows principle?" is not a simple but a complex one. The effectiveness of a leader is subjective to whom this question is being asked. A fellow politician of that political leader might have a different opinion than a common person.
So it is not easy to say that a political leader is effective or not based on who the leader listens to.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83561643836 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72007411558 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433789954338 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2842055937 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.9 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365114038984 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126020172579 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810953373352 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237401527332 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740625522745 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.