Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
This topic raises a controversial issue whether telecommunication technology increases the human interaction or its hamper the meeting of individuals. I firmly believe that technology reduces the human effort in communication. I will prove this point of view with relevant example in upcoming paragraphs. However, inordinate use of technology restrain the communication in family. I strongly believe that moderate use of technology always helpful to the human-kind.
First and foremost, in 18th century there were no any excellent technology that provides good communication and mostly communication was done by the letters. Apart from that, delivery of the letters took a more time. However, today people easily contact to each other using smartphones. Also, telecommunication companies provide excellent services with minimal charges. Hence, every individuals stay connected with their family and friends. For example, in 21st century Whatsapp is the prevalent medium for contacting people. it's services are fabulous; with use of internet every individual able to send text message. In addition, use of video-calling should not overlooked. Today, many online classes are available and use of this student easily get fantastic education from different international universities. Hence, technology reduces the distance of people and gives opportunity to stay connected with their families.
Secondly, find the information related to every person becomes easy with use of social-media. Today, many people find their peers using internet. However, such type of services were not available in past decades and due to that human spent more effort to find contacts in that era. However, for accessing internet some what extent computer or smart phone knowledge is required, it is best way to intimate the individuals in current time.The 4G technology is the great invention of human-being and use of this becomes paramount. Using that many children able to plays online games, without any face-to-face contacts and enjoy high-resolution games.
Admittedly, excessive use of technologies curb the human contacting. In contemporary time, members of every family busy with their social-media accounts. They spend time with virtual friends. As a result relationship bonds are deteriorated. Parents have no time for their off-spring and children are busy with online games. That produces the malicious effect on relationship in modern society.
To conclude, technology is the great gift of god; but, it is responsibility of the person that they use it when its need are required. I firmly believe that technology decrease the distance between humans and provide efficient platform for staying connected at every second.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...nd foremost, in 18th century there were no any excellent technology that provides ...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...prevalent medium for contacting people. its services are fabulous; with use of inte...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'overlook'
Suggestion: overlook
...dition, use of video-calling should not overlooked. Today, many online classes are availab...
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Line 9, column 315, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
...at era. However, for accessing internet some what extent computer or smart phone knowledg...
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Line 9, column 382, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...r smart phone knowledge is required, it is best way to intimate the individuals in curr...
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Line 9, column 438, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ntimate the individuals in current time.The 4G technology is the great invention of...
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Line 13, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... They spend time with virtual friends. As a result relationship bonds are deterio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69362745098 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11644349533 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0879943268 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9642857143 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10714285714 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338947566908 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882890044801 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672641396446 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191000569508 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579689468225 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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