A great Nation is one where its people are able to live happy, peaceful, healthy, and prosperous. One important factor of the great Nation is the well-being of the people located in that Nation which is directly related to the people’s basic and specific needs like food, Health, education, social needs, and so on. Even though, the great rulers, artists, or scientists represent the nations and bring great name and fame. According to the prompt, the inevitable indicator of a nation being great is the well-being of its people, not the achievements of the rulers, artists, or scientists. I mostly agree with the given prompt for the following two persuasive reasons. However, I do concede that the artists, rulers, and scientists are the National heroes who introduce the Nation to the international world.
To Begin, Social welfare depends on the different desires of the human beings that are encapsulated in this Nation. The key fundamental needs are like, food, Health, and education which are directly related to the cheerfulness, tranquility, and social-cultural development of the Nations. Finally, that helps the country become great. For Instance, According to the World Happiness Index 2023, Finland is the happiest Country in the world for 6 consecutive years. How do we get the result that? It belongs to the people’s welfare, not the achievement of the one or two rulers or artists or scientists. Similarly, For the World Peaceful Index 2023, Iceland is in the first rank, and for the healthiest index, Singapore. All the above indices prove that, for the greatness of the Nations, the greatness of the people is the most, is directly proportional to the general well-being of the people. Social prosperity plays a vital role rather than one or two important achievements by the nations.
Furthermore, Good government with great leaders who care about their people’s every essential and precise need helps the growth of the Nation. If you are able to increase the economy of the individual people, you can achieve the best result for the Nation as well. For Example, In India, Prime Minister Narendra Modi has been initiating different public well-being programs and campaigns like “Clean India”. The goal of this program is to eliminate open defection and improve solid waste management. Similarly, another one is the “Prime Minister Development Program” that has been helping the poor and middle class people to better lives. Look at the result of India, India has upgraded to the 5th largest economy in the world. The above example implies that the general improvement of the people plays the huge role to the Nation’s development.
However, the great rulers, artists, or the great scientists represent the Nation and bring great recognition. They are the prime indicator of the country. Invention of certain scientific theories helps introduce the Nation to the worldwide. Similarly, the creation of specific art like sketch painting, writing Novels or poems or even Books, introducing National culture and so on also play a major role in leading the Nation. For example, Vincent Van Gogh, a great painter in the history of art who introduced the Netherland to the global. Likewise, Nicolas Copernicus, a great astronomer and mathematician, discovered the solar system known as the father of astronomy. He helped to make known to the country Poland to the sphere. So, sometimes, one famous person can disseminate the Nation to the universe.
In Conclusion, surely, for the greatness of the Nation, the progression of public welfare is the essential panacea but one thing also should not be ignored our international heroes like scientists, artists, and even rulers. Those also are our National prosperity.
- Critical judgement of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in the field 66
- Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the 50
- An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces A study reports that in nearby East Meria where fish consumption is very high people visit the doctor only once or twice per 62
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement a 50
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 58
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...the best result for the Nation as well. For Example, In India, Prime Minister Na...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3150.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 603.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83531266964 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47263681592 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 955.8 704.065955056 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4544086302 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4375 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.84375 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253061457282 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623844786726 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539879433244 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135502656288 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616868507183 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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