Teacher s salaries should be based on their students academic performance

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Teacher's salaries should be based on their students academic performance

I dont completely argee with the falacious position assuming that decrease in salary will improve students academic performance. Salary is the return for their service and cutting the amount they get would not be a quite prudent decision. Without the proper study of student performance, not setting proper academic paramter to judge the performance will directly affect the teaching- learning system. I feels this way for two reason which are thoroughly described on the below mentioned paragraphs.
First of all, the teacher will be discouraged if his salary will be decreased because of student performance. Lets say if he is giving his best for teaching student, he brings neccessary material for study before introducing the topic to class, conduct a discussion among the student after lecture, takes quiz and term paper as a means of evaluating the performance and grade of student but if still the student gets low grade which might the effect of several extraneous factor involved like role of administration, home enviornment of students, their peer's influence, their attendance in class and many other likewise. For this teacher, the cut of his salary will be demotivating and may cause serious impact which can cause long term effect to student.
Furthermore, another reason why i doubt this way of acting upon teacher is not wise is that it might cause long term impact on student career. Lets take an example of a avarice teacher who's shrewd enough to manipulate the grade of student. He might set an easy way of evaluating the class performance like taking home quiz and allowing requiz till third attempt, simulating the paper from the last year test where student can copy the seniors answer beforehand, all these deeds inorder to get a high salary. So, this will seriously hamper student academic career as they will not be wary of their study and academics which will make them incompetitent in global job market in future.
But what might be effective way to maintain the good academic performance of student can be done by giving honors and accolades to the teacher at the last of the academic year based on his effectiveness of teaching which is evaluated not only by the grades of student but rather through a comprehensive evaluation.then only this will prove to be a wise decision by the eduaction institution so far.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00684931507 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7348501132 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.232705961 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.444444444 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267425706327 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106210426398 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395274501859 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267425706327 0.150359130593 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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