Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance

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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

It is not uncommon to see people agree that teachers’ salaries should be tied to students’ academic performance. Most people likened this statement with how employees in corporate organization are evaluated based on the company’s profit figures or their ability to meet up with their key performance indicators. However, academic world differs greatly, and teachers should not be held fully responsible for student’s academic performance. The reason behind my stance is delineated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Teachers are employed to instruct, encourage, and instil knowledge on students ‘willing’ to learn. Let us bear in mind that, learning is a psychological concept and cannot be forced. A student who naturally hates studies would report a poor performance for his inefficiencies. If in this situation arises the teacher who taught the student will likely go home with no paycheck at the end of pay day. For instance, While I was at the university, the head of department instructed the students that they can report any lecturer who is not meeting up to standard or inefficient. Due to this instruction, most student used this opportunity to abscond from lectures. During semester exam, they would claim they were not taught what is been asked in the exam. The Lecturers would have been in trouble, safe for those few good students who stood up for these poor lecturers left in the mercy of unserious students.
Of course, I agree that teachers should be held responsible to students’ academic performance as some teachers can be nonchalant. However, teachers are just like any other worker who are employed to instruct and not to guarantee academic performance. In fact, student’s academic performance nis largely determined by his parent or guardian. These people play a major role in the life of this kids, when a student is emotionally and mentally disturbed, poor academic performance in inevitable. An example of a child who has always been the best student in his class suddenly became the top bottom of the class. Upon investigation, they realized his parents were going through a rough divorce. This situation affected his performance and his human relation at school. So, in this situation, the teacher’s salary would have suffered from such student poor performance, most especially caused by factors beyond the teacher’s control.

Lastly, teaching is an art, it cannot be forced. Some students deliberately would punish their teachers if they realised their performance is tied to teacher’s salaries. They would likely become very subjective, in the sense that, they will deliberately perform well in the courses of some of their favourite teachers and not perform well in some courses who they don’t have a like for. All this in a bid to punish teachers they do not like. I will not forget to add that, some teachers as well, because they know their income depends on fantastic academic performance, they become subjective in their marking guilde and decides to score all the students well. Even if most of the student performed poorly. This they do in other to keep their paycheck intact.

Capping it all, I agree teachers plays important role in the academic performance of students, but the idea that teachers’ salary should be largely influenced by student performance is subjective and not a proper means of rewarding labour.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, of course, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2855.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2098540146 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9155964435 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487226277372 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 864.9 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0468001882 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.964285714 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492459246751 0.243740707755 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140076655556 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12813248109 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332378972057 0.150359130593 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118596277534 0.0667264976115 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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