Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position. Whether the technology has simplifies our lives or has made it more complicated is a long existing debate topic. Our lives have become dependent on technology.
Technology, defined as tools that make our life easier and more comfortable, is discussed by some people that it only makes our lives more complicated rather than simplify our lives. In my opinion, the author's vision is based on some simple facts, and it is not as convincing as it stands. Although technology sometimes makes our life not as easy as we thought, it still helps us a lot, saying technology only makes our lives complicated is unwarranted.
As the author proposed, sometimes, our lives do get more complicated due to the development of technology. On the on hand, learning how to use the phone, how to connect the internet and how to use online payment to take the subway instead of using transportation card tend to be difficult at the first time, in hence, we will hesitate the strengthen of technology during this period of time. On the other hand, technology does have some disadvantages, such as when we used to contact people by cell phone, the close relationship between people is discreasing than ever. Overusing social website does make ourselves have a sedentary life, which is unhealthy for us.
However, technology is the tool of human, the reason why we people are more talented than regular animals is that we have the ability to make tools rather than fix problems only by our hands. We make tools to simplify our lives, in the same way, we develop technology to help us explicate problems more complicated, and explore the world we still cannot figure out. Furthermore, we do develop better by using technologies we made. For example, we explored thousands unknown island, and we went to the moon which is so far away from us that our forebears would never think we people can go. These examples can in favor of the view of mine---technologies make our lives easier.
Moreover, in my view, the reason why I do not support this statement is the word "only", everything has two sides, so does technology. Sometimes, it does make our lives more complicated, but we cannot deny the bright side of it. The advantages of technology, at least by now, is more significant than the disadvantages. For instance, the development of the internet, helped lots of people who live far away from their family can contact each other anytime they want.
To sum up, I largely disagree with the author's opinion, because the technology has changed our lives a lot, and it did make us better, even there are some negative impactions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he word 'only', everything has two sides, so does technology. Sometimes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, as to, at least, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90023752969 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87571067064 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50593824228 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.846582157 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.352941176 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5882352941 5.21951772744 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218755387598 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847887101212 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069679541915 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138527544822 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521139080836 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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