Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology has become one of the pillars of our society today. It is very difficult to even imagine a life without the revolutionary changes technology has brought in our lives. It is so deeply infused in our daily lives that we take it for granted how dependant we are on the fruits of technology. It is a boon to humanity.
Consider leaving home in the morning to find out you have to figure out how to reach work every single day. This will cause a significant loss of productivity since it will delay you, use your brainpower. On the other hand consider having a GPS enabled car at your disposal. Now, all you have to do is follow the instructions as the car knows your work place and provides real-time optimal directions.
Suppose you are on your way to work and your car broke down. All you have to do is use your cellphone to get it repaired while you reach work by hiring a cab using the cellphone. Without the technology of rockets to launch the satellites used for communication along with other multiple technologies this would've complicated the situation a lot more.
These are just a few examples out of thousands of how technology is simplifying our if life not complicating it like medical tech, nano tech, etc. People of all ages, races, religions benefit from it. However the older age group might feel that things have taken a turn for being complicated than before. This might be because they are exposed late in life to the technologies of today. But I think with sufficient help, training and hand on experience even the old can benefit a lot from technology which overwhelm them in terms of usage.
I think the complications people think technology brings with it can be tackled with a planned approach. Technology has become an important aspect of humanity by immensely simplifying lives and it will continue to do so. It is us who have to make sure we don't let tech overwhelm us with its intricacies and help ourselves to a simpler lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: would've
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67335243553 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74387879891 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555873925501 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8405981598 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8421052632 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211033145995 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058756738537 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437759522214 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113166602975 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450492307836 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.