Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Discussion on whether technology has made our lives easier or even more complicated, in my opinion is a very nuanced one. I would argue that there are a number of aspects to this discussion that all need to be considered.
Throughout history technoligical breakthroughs have undoubtedly gone on to make lives easier for the common people. Take the example of the invention of the silicon chip which many would consider to be the single most important invention of the digital age. The silicon chip took us to the moon. Before the invention on the silicon chip computers used to be the size of whole rooms. They required a whole staff of people to maintain and operate. They were accesible only to universities and the military. The silicon chip brought the computer to the domestic household. It created calculators, when there was a time people were employed simply for the job of doing calculations manually.
Technology has brought us closer together and made the world smaller than ever.
Today we can instantly send messages across the world. Until the conception of the email or even the telephone, it could take weeks, or even months for a message to travel such long distances and even longer to receive a reply. Advancements in technology benefit everyone. As technology improves the cost of doing things decreases. For example, with the passage of time, innovations in manufacturing have continuously driven down prices of cars making them available to almost everyone. The same can be said for computers and all manufactured consumer products for that matter.
There are aspects in which technology has also somewhat made life more complicate d for the modern individual. In todays age of where any and information is available in the palm of hands, at the push of a button it has become increasingly difficult to navigate this ocean of information. Creating and propagating news has become easier and identifying it much more difficult. Social media to a large extent has traded physical human interaction for the instant gratification of likes and comments. Given these aspects are also there, I would however, never go so far as to state that technology has not made our lives easier. It will continue to do so in the future and in some ways make it more complicated as well. The line I would say is a a very thin one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90151515152 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83619361738 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4857349417 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.79166666667 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108469209508 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270971688495 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490375986001 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601275680082 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561793228637 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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