Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
'The ones who are standing against you today as of their immaturity shall tomorrow turn into your biggest supporters as of your persuasion.'- Umair (Self written)
Society is dynamic in nature, it criticises, doubts at a moment and accepts at the next. It all depends on how you persuade and to whom you persuade. There is an immensely popular saying by the stalwart of philosophy, Aristotle:
'One argument is enough to convince a thousand wise men but even thousands of arguments can never convince a fool.'
This statement (though exaggerated and subjective) but, acts as a mirror to the society that has always shown rejection to new ideas. Our Society is unfortunately constituted by a number of people diverse in cultures, religion and language. However, the majority of these people have one thing in common - 'Inability of doing Rational Thinking' or in other words are 'fools' as of Aristotle, those who are unable to look beyond their faith. Our history has been a witness of a number of events and characters but most of them have been forgotten. The ones who still reside in the hearts of the people are those who brought revolution.
We know about many revolutionaries, their contribution, the reforms they brought into the society but, only a few know about the struggles they had to encounter. Every revolution originates from an idea, an idea that often attempts to challenge or break the conservative regime prevailing from years or decades if not from centuries. It is obvious that promulgating something that intends to collapse the system shall be subjected to extreme doubts and criticism. Conservatives have always opposed any reform and what made them strong is that they have generally outnumbered the revolutionaries posing a great threat to them. Revolutionaries have presented many arguments but conservatives, blinded by their faiths, have denied them and those whose minds were intellectual accepted the reality.
Many philosophers or thinkers think of revolutionary ideas but resist to promulgate them due to the fear of doubts and criticism. They are less known among people and their legacies remain unsung. One among such people is Sir Nicolaus Copernicus who asserted that centre is the center of universe and the earth revolved around the son which was an anti-thesis of biblical theory assuming earth as the centre of universe. He prepared this theory but, chose to remain silent, afraid of the actions of Orthodox Christians. However, after his death, some of his disciples decided to popularise his idea and that is how we know about him. But, we don't know how many such ideas would have died along with the death of the ones who thought them.
The ones who are popular are those who see their ideas by their own vision, those who decide to propagate their ideas, unafraid of the doubts and criticism that is inevitable. They create ideas, their ideas create followers, their followers create history and the history sings their legacy. There are many such thinkers. However, I am going to describe several thinkers whose stories shaped my positive position on this subject:
(i) Juana de'la Cruez: She was an intellectual woman who encouraged the idea of feminism through writing - a profession that was not 'meant for women' in the eighteenth century. She served as courtier in the Spanish Mexico despite facing criticism from other nobles. She encouraged women to demand and if needed, fight for their rights. Her writings also criticised the governance of the state which ultimately lead to her sentence of death. She died but her idea of feminism and her legacy remains untouched. Her footprints can be seen in Spanish literature till date.
(ii) Karl Marx: He was a social thinker who is also known as the top gun of Sociology. He gave popular theories like Historical Materialism and Class Conflict. Marx was also a critique of Capitalism. He urged the proletariats to develop class consciousness and escape the matrix of capitalism and poverty. His ideas was widely criticised by the industrialists or Bourgeoisie and was doubted by the proletariats who were expected to do it. However, his dedication popularised his idea of Communism, which still is a system of economy is many countries symbolising his legacy.
(iii) Sir Syed Ahmad Khan: He was an official of British government who later became a social reformer. He initiated the Aligarh movement and established Aligarh Muslim University. He asserted to combine the teaching of Western Sciences and traditional Islamic Studies which was criticised by radical Islamists. He also popularised 'Itijihad' - a right of inquiry of sacred texts. The Aligarh Muslim University still remains as one of the best universities of not just India but complete Asia rejoicing his legacy. This can be seen in his books including the commentary on Quran.
As we can see from the stories of these three legends and how they proclaimed their legacy. We have also seen that the people who were afraid to popularise their ideas are forgotten. Drawing conclusion from these points, I highly agree that those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts and criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. If you want to be leave a legacy, you need to see your idea through your own ideas regardless of what the society thinks. , Remember, 'Legends are not born, they are created.'
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 19.5258426966 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 34.0 11.3162921348 300% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 103.0 33.0505617978 312% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 110.0 58.6224719101 188% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4504.0 2235.4752809 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 891.0 442.535393258 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05499438833 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.46348086051 4.55969084622 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78201431212 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 424.0 215.323595506 197% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475869809203 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1422.9 704.065955056 202% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 35.0 6.24550561798 560% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 20.2370786517 222% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9606548382 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.088888889 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.13820224719 350% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321956890252 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621393718926 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873055365633 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124024970509 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097495743833 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 226.0 100.480337079 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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