Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
When one pursues a passion or tries to change the world, a multitude of risks arise. Many individuals start to doubt themselves as prospects become uncertain and may give up before seeing their ideas to fruition, but those that push themselves through hesitation and the naysay of others are the ones that make a lasting impact on our society in the long run.
For example, social change movements are often spearheaded by the ideas of an individual; an underdog that a majority doubt. Martin Luther King Jr. is the epitome of this idea. Although a great majority of Americans were against him and believed that African Americans did not deserve to be equals, he pushed through the doubts of the masses and held fast to his ideas. He held speeches, went to prison, was more than ridiculed by the public, but continued speaking his mind despite the great risks. Even when other groups promoted the eye-for-an-eye mindset, King argued for peace, knowing full well the philosophy would put his followers and himself in a position to not fight back. King, through his drive, determination, and passion, was able to change America in the long run. His name will forever be remembered in the history books.
Individuals that stop at nothing to see their ideas through are not only successful in social justice however. Many technological companies that have modernized the world we know today were started by stubborn, passionate individuals. Steve Jobs, the now multi-millionaire owner of Apple, quit his job to pursue the advancement of technology. Though nothing like the iPhone had ever been invented before and there was no guarantee of his success, Jobs took the jump through all the doubts and started his own company. Now he has pioneered incredible technology that we now see everyday. Computers, smartphones, touchscreens, advanced camera lenses and chips, we all have today because of Jobs' determination to push through. He has undoubtably affected the lives of many people.
Though this stubborn drive is good to have, some argue that rejecting criticism will only lead to failure. It's not that these individuals don't accept criticism, it's that they choose who to listen to wisely and only take advice to forward their own goals, for if we listen to everyone in the world, there will always be contradicting opinions on how we should proceed. No one knows the future though, so it is best to stick to your goals and dreams and listen to yourself, as demonstrated by the many already successful individuals in our history books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 578, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d incredible technology that we now see everyday. Computers, smartphones, touchscreens, ...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ng criticism will only lead to failure. Its not that these individuals dont accept ...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...failure. Its not that these individuals dont accept criticism, its that they choose ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...hese individuals dont accept criticism, its that they choose who to listen to wisel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99764150943 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74489294869 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587264150943 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9942177358 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.526315789 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11655478629 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324086531648 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383813924391 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780593439297 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438436519869 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.