Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In this ambivert world, I believe there are sundry people and organisations which will always be on the other side of the road. Your path of career is in your hands and giving a control of this path might lead to some serious consequences.
Taking an example from daily basis, you must have encountered many situations where you have two choices for a question. Its very common in high schools to often take extra courses to finish off your credits early. The decision of which course to take is primarily dependent on two factors, one is what course interests you the most and second and the most common tendency observed among the teenagers is that they undergo the mistake of opting a course just because their friends are taking the same. This peer-pressure or self-doubt whatever you may call it seems to be a bit unreasonable, especially in the case where you showcase an irrelevant opted course in your resume to an interviewer, without having proper explanation to comprehend the fact that it was someone else, who may have put you in the state of self-doubt.
The above instance may point to a solution of not interacting with anyone and rather taking your decision without anyone's interference. This solution might be fruitful sometimes but not always. You have to interact with different people around you to get to know more about their experiences and their common mistakes, from which you can learn from. Taking advice from parents, friends, neighbourhoods is not a bad idea, because after all you also need someone who can bolster on your opinion.
Founder of Facebook, Mark Zuckerberg often quotes "Do what your heart says. This world will always be against you and this same world will be with you, only on one condition that you shall follow your heart and pursue what makes you who you are". This famous quote reminds me that there was a time when everybody criticized Mark for his senseless decision of dropping out from Harvard. But he fought for his happiness and today, this same world appreciates him and his gigantic contributions to the society. However, if he would have taken all the criticisms seriously, then I think he would might be one of the general U.S. citizen working for a corporate firm with that mundane routine.
According to me, the best possible solution to this convoluted way of life, is to just listen to everybody and do what makes you feel comfortable. There is always an unsubconscious voice inside us, which points out the correct path for us. Doubts and criticism should be considered, but if your mind resonates with what defines you, then surely take that path, because you never know these may be the people who may congratulate you on your success one day but that's only possible, if you take the correct road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ion might be fruitful sometimes but not always. You have to interact with different pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'had taken'?
Suggestion: had taken
...ibutions to the society. However, if he would have taken all the criticisms seriously, then I th...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...rate firm with that mundane routine. According to me, the best possible solution to this con...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...atulate you on your success one day but thats only possible, if you take the correct ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, then, after all, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84486373166 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58240249731 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524109014675 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3909716433 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.388888889 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261688818632 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799298124218 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705204856816 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159030911988 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502704134638 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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