"True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace."
perception of the beauty varied from the person to person thus it qualifies the metaphor that “beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. person obviously get attracted with the beauty of the materialistic world. it depends upon the eyes of the person to qualify the beauty and might find in the place where he/she familiar to. but, the claim that “True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace” is too specific and more sophisticated in judgment. There is majorly two reasons that undermine the purposed claim.
To begin, perception of the human matters the must to define the concept of beauty and it is fact that he acknowledged the beauty more when he is less familiar with. psychology plays the key factor in the context of the beauty. In instance, the psychology entails that the matter you do not get acquainted finds more attractive than the matter as equally beautiful but well acquainted with you. The factor of the boredom haunts more to this particular type of phenomena. thus, it supports the claim that people find the things more beautiful in the rare and unfamiliar condition.
Again, erosion of the beauty of the any place might rise due to the exploitation of the resource. The common place might demand large quantity of the resource to fulfil the demand of the today progressive population and as well as its commensurate increase in the demand. In instance, the capital of Nepal is one of the most beautiful city previously. but, now, its beauty gets faded away as evanescent smoke due to ramification of the population increment -increase in pollution, loss of natural heritage and degradation of the resources. In any case, the hub of the population might not accompany the claim that beauty lies in the commonplace.
In conclusion, beauty may lies in the commonplace if it get nurtured with deliberate care from the people. However, people become globalized and heavily predisposed to self, causes the less importance to these matter and treated the responsibility as common banal. thus, it can be refer that the beauty should always lies in the pristine stage and remain always beautiful if nobody sabotage its integrity which is massively possible in the seclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s massively possible in the seclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00806451613 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85151452781 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486559139785 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0994193679 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170865197512 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053840200183 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494964179322 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990455742191 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387798575398 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.