True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
The author asserts that true success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals setted by oneself. I cound not agree with the author anymore. For that only achieve one's own goals, one can be called successful.
Many famous people become successful by achieving their own goals. In this process, people should keep on learning and be dilligent in order to be able to accomplish the goals. it is not an easy task to realize them, so, such accomplishment not only can satisfy themselves, but also can entice more people to chase their own dreams. this is the real success, therefore, goals are the only standard to evaluate one's success. Abraham Lincon was a normal person at first without any background and wealth, he entered the politic field just by studying and hard-working. finally he became the president of America, this is his success. elon musk said that he wanted to form an electronic cars company, then the company was founded and has developed well, this is his success. Manhattan Project was designed for making nuclear bomb, after several years' investigation, Oppenheimer and other scientists finally made it, this is their success.
if we do not use goals as standard, we cannot find some other more persuasive standards. some people may think hard-working or dilligent can demonstrate one's success, while others may believe that wealth can determine one's success. however, in my own view, such opinions are too narrow to evaluate a person. Hard-working and dilligent are certainly virtues of a person, nevertheless, they can never measure one's success, casue there are lots of people being dilligent. The number of people being anxiety in today has shown that there are so many people are trying their best but winning nothing at last. if hard-wroking and dilligent euqal to success, then succes is too cheap, just like give every athletes a gold medal. The wealth is not useful in such case, even though be wealthy is the dream for most people, but it is not pervasive. some people are wealthy becasue they born with it, the familiy background make them have more money than others. if they want to prove they are successful, then they need to make more money or achieve more out of wealth. For example, Trump makes more money by his own talents than his parents and become president in 2018, this is success. In sum, we judge one's success by achieveing their own goals but not wealth. In the same way, one's fame, honor or some characters like modest, friendly, genrous could not be the standard, unless they set these points as their own goals and achieve them.
Last but not the least, somebody holds that minor goals cannot be treated as success. however, we should recognize that every great goal is made of countless minor goals. For every person, they just finish minor goals everyday, but one day, these minor goals will drive us to the final great goal. we can say that without these minor goals, no great goal can be achieved. if a person just graduates from university without any backgrounds, for instance, and wants to achieve financial freedom, the first step is to find a work. if a girl wants to lose weight, the first step is to lose one pound. it is also effective for a company or organization, elon musk wants to repalce traditional cars with electronic cars, the first step is to produce the Roadster for wealthy people, then produce some advanced cars, finally produce cars for normal people.
All in all, the best way to evaluate one's success is by setting one's goals. only in this way, we can have a concise and convenient method to assess one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2987.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80998389694 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44589943947 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466988727858 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 912.6 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5969482475 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.34375 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.40625 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21875 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 10.2758426966 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40372513063 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109219743581 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130862698408 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278450221377 0.150359130593 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166562763223 0.0667264976115 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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