True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
The statement claims that true success can be measured by the goal one sets for oneself. I agree with this statement insofar as different people has different goal and their determination of success are different. Success is measured by how closely you reached your goal. Goal is determined the ultimate and final destination and success is measured by this. However, there are some objects that have the fixed goal that is set universally not set by oneself. And the success level are measured by universally not by one.
One compelling argument in favor on my position is, in our society different person has different goal that is set by oneself. The definitions of success are totally different from each others. For example, poor people in the society has the goal to meet their basic needs properly and they thought it is their goal. When they meet this successfully think as a winner. On the other hand the homeless dream is to make a home to live and this is his ulimate goal. Similarly for rich people goal is to increase their wealth and asssets. So different types of people has different goal and when they reach this successfully think as a winner.
Another argument is in the society goal is the temporary things and it is changable. In the capitalist society, everyone want more and more. And when they meet their primary goal then target for another goal. So the defination of success for him will be changed after being success. So the success is measured by the goal set by oneself. For example, when a homeless will be successfully build a home then his target will be changed and think for better home and settlement. And the previous success will be faded for him.
Moeover, in the society, for the same wealth can makes someone's happy and someone's unhappy. That means their goal is not alligned with this because of the setted goal by oneself. In the exam someone's get 3.5 out of 5 and think himself as a successful person on the other hand someone who get 4.7 out of 5 are totally unhappy and think as a failure.
However, in the competitive world, there are some goal that are setted by universally not by oneself. And the level of success is determine by externally not by one. For example, in the university admission exam, everyone's have the common goal to get chance in the university. And this is fixed by the university controlling committee not by oneself. When anyone not passed the exam not considered as successful person. In the business, to increase the market share is the common goal for all competitor. In the pace society, some goals are common and these are setted by externally not oneself.
In conclusion, most othe goal set by oneself and consider successful when he fulfill this goal but in the competition world most of the goals are common for all competitor and the success are measured by externally. Nonetheless, goal also set by oneself in the competition world because the goal never been end and a person never been successful if he measures the goal externally. So there must be some goal that ais set by oneself and measure the success by completing the goal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...e to live and this is his ulimate goal. Similarly for rich people goal is to increase the...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...in the society, for the same wealth can makes someones happy and someones unhappy. Th...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...by oneself. And the level of success is determine by externally not by one. For example, ...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y controlling committee not by oneself. When anyone not passed the exam not consider...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... are setted by externally not oneself. In conclusion, most othe goal set by onese...
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Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fulfills'.
Suggestion: fulfills
...oneself and consider successful when he fulfill this goal but in the competition world ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, similarly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2573.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71245421245 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59045912368 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360805860806 0.4932671777 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8450955379 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9696969697 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.12121212121 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50601382218 0.243740707755 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168465803496 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13673712396 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312435210178 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121216845182 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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