To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement cites here, one must study the major cities to understand the most important characteristics of a society. To improve our society and to address the problem we face one should always spend time on studying our society. But should we invest more time in cities or villages is often a debatable topic and I support the stated statement.
First of all, in major cities, various people come from different part of the country for various reasons such as to find work, better medical facilities, better lifestyle etc. We will find the people from different faith, different race and different background together only in the major cities which are the most crucial things to study to understand how these people live together, work together and drive our society.
Furthermore, Revolution happens only in the major cities and most of the complicated problems we face in the cities only. To understand and have a better idea about such things about society cities are the most preferable options to study.
In conclusion, as we find in the cities varieties of events and activities, and various kind of people involved in them, so we must study the major cities to understand the important characteristics of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04390243902 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7112737512 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 215.323595506 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49756097561 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1526639665 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.21951772744 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181012770554 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955646714005 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847498438204 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115600387814 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421524907216 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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