The issue here is about knowing the important things of a society, one must consider to study its major cities, and I disagree.
Firstly, it is not appropriate to just study the major cities of a society, to understand the culture or characteristics. Because in some society which is popular for something or stand unique for others, it is totally possible that immigrants come to live there rest of lives in that city just because they love their culture and if one wants to study the society then the data collected by that individual might not be relevant and most probably it would be mixture of other society because of immigrants, for instance if one want to study Maharashtra a state of India and he/she just studied the major cities of this state which is Mumbai, if that individual collects the data of Mumbai then the data on which whole state is going to represented is not quite right, because in Mumbai there are 80% immigrants for North India came here for jobs. Then in this case that individual who is studying this characteristic should also take some villages where the culture of Maharashtra is alive where there are no or less immigrants available, place like where there is no special tourist attraction.
Secondly, take example of Germany, if one wants to study the culture and important characteristics of Germany and he/she choses to just explore the main hub of that country, then they are going to have some faulty data. because, for instance, in Germany people in cities behave more differently as compare to the people who are living in country side. the people in cities are less welcoming and people in country side are more welcoming.
Inconclusion, to know the culture of the society and important characteristics one must choose to explore both major cities as well as non-major cities. in my opinion one must consider to give more time to non-major cities as compare to major cities.
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- argument:The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a scientific journal."A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimula 42
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 37
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'represent'
Suggestion: represent
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Line 3, column 1008, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...of Maharashtra is alive where there are no or less immigrants available, place lik...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun immigrants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...arashtra is alive where there are no or less immigrants available, place like where ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...hey are going to have some faulty data. because, for instance, in Germany people in cit...
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Suggestion: The
... people who are living in country side. the people in cities are less welcoming and...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ust choose to explore both major cities as well as non-major cities. in my opinion one mus...
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Suggestion: In
...jor cities as well as non-major cities. in my opinion one must consider to give mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84545454545 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67094182101 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.350015649 60.3974514979 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.666666667 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204182958634 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964153545731 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627540732492 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143358882065 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527117039454 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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