To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The argument claims that studying major cities is needed to figure out the most important features of a community. I agree with the argument in that major cities are good place to see curreent socioeconomic status in a community and there are relatively many people stay there.
Of course, it is ideally desirable to see all cities and counties to understand the features of a society. other than the major cities, it is undeniable that small regions are a member of a community and represent some dimension of a society. since even small counties have their own characteristics, studying only major cities other than small regions cannot fully explain the whole characteristics of a society. Nonetheless, major cities are given to precedence to be studied prior to minor regions.
First, while looking at major cities, it is easy to see the current economic and social trends. For example, when you see seoul in South korea, you would easily find a myriad of academic institutions and plastic surgery clinics. The former may represent the excessive educational fever and the latter shows lookism or discrimination of appearance. So, many people visit seoul to obtain better education training and have more beautiful apperance since it is very difficult to find them in the other areas. To study the korean culture especially in conjunction with education or lookism, you need to study seoul.
Furthermore, major cities tend to have many population with extremely high population density relative to other areas. Intuitively, since big cities generally account for higher proportion of the national population, the residents in that cities can be representative to the society. Also, the culture have a tendency to spread very fast due to development of telecommunication technologies. For instance, in korea, half of the total population live in near seoul, the capital. Suppose people in seoul enjoy youtube and it is the one of the major features of korean people. Then, the preference for youtube might spread to other regions. Thus, we do not have to have an additional study on youtube in other small areas. Instead, we can say that nowadays young people tend to enjoy on youtube after studying the people's behavior in seoul.
To sum up, even though it is good to study all regions, practically it is more effective to study major cities to understand the features of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12977099237 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87860156143 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491094147583 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8360520177 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.8 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234395515355 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707829325857 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676411989335 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146563101899 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657864011576 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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