To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Studying major cities exemplifies the way the society is currently functioning, thereby determining its characteristics will help in understanding the society better.
Cities are the great example of how a society is shaped. Populous cities like Beijing, Mumbai, New york is filled with plethora of ethnicities. Everyday many people ensconced themselves for better facilities of health, education and work opportunities. Understanding these broader group of people not help in characterizing the city but also helps us understand a wide variety of perspectives. Moreover, major cities offer a wide and extreme spectrum of characteristics of the society: Mumbai, known for both financial extremities of the people, offering a different set of religion ethnicities, ranging from extreme corruption to honesty. Whereas, moderate cities like Pune has much less to offer thereby providing a biased view on the consensus
However, too much data might also lead to a problem of outliers which if not considered properly will affect the way characteristics are derived.
In conclusion, Major cities are rich source for diversified data before providing a better analysis and giving characteristics of a society in general.
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- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and suppo 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
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Suggestion:
...providing a biased view on the consensus However, too much data might also lead t...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ew on the consensus However, too much data might also lead to a problem of ou...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...lso lead to a problem of outliers which if not considered properly will affect the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 33.0505617978 12% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72131147541 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32155043671 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0297275468 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147785497179 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606974073816 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677622234251 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10219397022 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661809186934 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.