To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. (3)
The society plays a major role in the particular community.In order to understand the structure of that society, one must study the most important point about society.The prompt recommended that in order to understands the characteristics of a society one must one must understands the important cities.In my opinion, i mostly disagree with the author's responses to the following three reasons.
First of all,the cities of a particular society do not represent society as a whole. There are many more things that are available in the cities but not a major part of society.For example, bangladesh is an agricultural society mostly but the cities of the country are totally different in the structure a nd it represents as bangladesh as a business organized country.The people in here are almost about 90% depend on agriculture where the cities are mostly adorned by the tall buildings.So if one study about the capital of the county she/he totally misjudge the structure of the society.
Secondly, one of the most important criteria of a society is the lifestyle of the people which include their food habit,their dress habit, their day to day activities.it is totally different picture to the village anfd the cities.for example, most of the village people are used to organized firm, their food habit mainly the firming food which they produce and their lifestyle is as simple as image but the cities life is full of business and their lifestyle do not represent the village life.So since a society built with a combination of village and cities so ignoring the village you can not have a clear look to the society.
Finally,the cultural elements of a society build up with it's inherent elements such as it's aesthetics busty including songs, stories, myths and dance criteria and many other elements.In this response the city elements are almost opposite to the village ones.For example the cities cultural things are including mostly on the multicultural things.such as international drama,fair,and display of portraits of international artists.On the other hand, village culture include it's inherent dance , songs, myths and also have hand made crafts.Thus the picture of the two-part is completely different.
In conclusion to the response of the author,it is clear that the cities culture are not sufficient to represent the pattern of the society .it require the combination of both it's elements to represent the characteristics of the particular society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99119846211 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441919191919 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.17781101 60.3974514979 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 355.666666667 118.986275619 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 23.4991977007 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6666666667 5.21951772744 473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327423618157 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169304428638 0.0831039109588 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173937917913 0.0758088955206 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198645179554 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173205108168 0.0667264976115 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 14.1392134831 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 48.8420337079 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 12.1743820225 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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