As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more
complex and more mysterious.
Knowledge helps people to get better insight about matters. Knowing things increases one’s possibility of being accepted in the intellectual society. People have developed college and universities and research institutes to reveal mysteries. This help people to be more active, more attached and more knowledgeable about the world we are living in. This knowledge have always given people happiness. When we start getting more insight and knowledge about something the idea about it and the approach towards it becomes more distinct and clear. In regard to complexity of things, everything around us are complex, therefore knowing less will do no good. In addition knowing about things around us and things happening around us will change the way we looked at them. A deep and proper insight will always help people to come up from various problematic situations and even may help to not get occupied with one on the very first hand.
First knowledge provides insights, which in turn will support one’s approach towards that matter. Knowledge is what shows people ways to lead an intellectual life full of dignity, respect, and acceptance. Today, the scientists, whom we call the most active best minds of the globe have achieved that position only because they have keen knowledge and have leached themselves to acquiring knowledge. Those scientists get happiness by discovering something new, innovative and unique. Apart from that knowledge is what has helped people to stand at the apex of the food chain and to call themselves the brightest of all animal in the animal kingdom.
Secondly, everything around us is complex, hence a deep insight is required to handle everything around us. Even the day to day activities requires some amount of knowledge. Therefore less knowledge about things may push us in a grave problem. This is where knowledge about things come in handy. More we acquire knowledge, more accurate will be out approach towards the things around us, which will no double lead to a better outcome.
Lastly, knowledge can even change the way we look at things, and many a time, an innovative and different approach is needed and here as stated before knowledge about that matter will play its role and will help unveil the mysteries on that particular matter. Being ignorant and happy is worse that being erudite and tensed about matters. That happiness achieved through ignorance lasts temporarily. But the happiness after achievement, which is achieved with profound knowledge and understanding is everlasting. Sir Albert Einstein must have felt joyous after his every discovery but still we are here studying analyzing and admiring his deep insights on the subject matter, which has led him to reveal the mysteries of that particular subject matter.
Along with knowledge, the insight about the matter keeps developing. One can become the master of what he or she is interested in, through knowledge. Knowledge does not make things complex, but in fact, unveil the complexities and mysteries on the subject matter. Knowledge alters the way we look at things happening around us, and will help us to deal with the matters safe and soundly.
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| 2019-09-07 | Pankaj Kumar | 66 | view |
| 2016-07-04 | Indranuj | 16 | view |
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- As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but morecomplex and more mysterious. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...refore knowing less will do no good. In addition knowing about things around us and thin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en may help to not get occupied with one on the very first hand. First knowled...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ties requires some amount of knowledge. Therefore less knowledge about things may push us...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...e accurate will be out approach towards the things around us, which will no double lead to a better ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'lastly', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220848056537 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.173144876325 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901060070671 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0512367491166 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0512367491166 0.0444667217837 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113074204947 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0565371024735 0.0406280797675 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63137675972 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265017667845 0.030933414821 86% => OK
Particles: 0.00353356890459 0.0016655270985 212% => OK
Determiners: 0.0848056537102 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247349823322 0.0249443105267 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017667844523 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3182.0 2732.02544248 116% => OK
No of words: 515.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1786407767 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396116504854 0.366273622748 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285436893204 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211650485437 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141747572816 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63137675972 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 219.290929204 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471844660194 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.9726400815 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3928571429 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8546831373 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3928571429 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 46.9365464632 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.41666666667 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239594617005 0.391690518653 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0845873220673 0.123202303941 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0711580340004 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461215052613 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146272255065 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812443059376 0.161403998019 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753740229072 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315861307193 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104035084309 0.0692045440612 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155018358346 0.275328986314 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578467781306 0.0653680567796 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.4325221239 201% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
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It is not right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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