As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious

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As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.

I believe that things are getting more clear as our knowledge extending instead of getting confusing or mysterious.
The common misunderstanding is that things get more complicated, because when scientists know more about the truth, they also find more issues or problems left to solve and create an illusion getting more confusing. As a matter of fact, things are not going to be more complex or intricate, because the universe has always been so complex, not relevant to our decision to acquire knowledge or not. Even if human don’t explore the science, the mystery is still there. In my opinion, instead of getting more complicated by learning more, the things are obviously clearer by expanding our knowledge. For example, years ago, if Einstein, one of the most greatest scientists, hadn’t proposed relative laws, we have no change to do space exploring. Based on the theory, many aircrafts and space telescope are invented so as to observe more unknown things about the universe. Therefore, acquiring knowledge is instead of getting things complicated, but closer to the truth.
The naysayers may claim that the beauty of artless life of the years before industrialization. At that time, people enjoyed the simplicity of life and needless to worry about other things. However, the simplicity also comes with inconvenience. For example, people in that ages had to prepare water by themselves and they didn’t have electricity so they could have any activities in the night. Moreover, they don’t have fast vehicles to travel far ways and couldn’t enjoy the spectacular scenery or interesting things far way. Thus, acquiring more knowledge undisputed improves quality of life in the society.
Despite people start thinking more complicated problems as acquiring more knowledge, the consequence is eventually beneficial since it boosts economy. For instance, After the computers invented in the mid twenty century, there have been tremendous jobs abruptly appearing, such as programming, integrated circuit design, website design and even artificial intelligence. Thanks to the knowledge digging, it raises so many families and creates so many jobs that stabilize the society as well as an engine to move further in the knowledge expedition. Another example is the automotive industry, because of the invention of the cars, it creates numerous jobs in the world as well as the linked industries to the automotive parts supplements and that’s backing the economy of nations.
In conclusion, things are not getting more complicated because the complexity is the intrinsic nature of the universe, instead, it not only improves quality of life but also backs economy, thus, exploring knowledge is advantageous for human society as a whole.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'greatest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: greatest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the greatest'.
Suggestion: most the greatest
...ple, years ago, if Einstein, one of the most greatest scientists, hadn’t proposed relative la...
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Line 2, column 812, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...crafts and space telescope are invented so as to observe more unknown things about the u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...proves quality of life in the society. Despite people start thinking more compl...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...he computers invented in the mid twenty century, there have been tremendous jobs abrupt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35796766744 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91333427553 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54272517321 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4981307758 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.105263158 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31578947368 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393880686741 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117000273417 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113392709002 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212209277515 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131560737082 0.0667264976115 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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