“As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.”
Can one really know about everything and be content with it?
It is said that life is more troublesome for those who seek answers than those who accept what comes along. While many believe that acquiring more and more knowledge is sufficient to understand the world, no one can become a know-it-all, because the more one knows the more questions arise. Such is the nature of the human brain.
Let’s look at an example of a little child who doesn’t know where water comes from. He will wonder and maybe ask his parents about the existence and emergence of a cup of water. Since the child is only a little, the parents will definitely mention rain and water bodies like lakes and oceans. It will only be a matter of some more time and years for the child to learn that ocean water is not drinkable and that rain comes down after the process of evaporation, which will lead to a further set of questions regarding the indefinite quantity of water and reasons for preserving water. Whereas the fact is that only 3% of water is drinkable. This process will go on and on till the child learns about molecules and atoms and other mysteries of the nature of water.
This process of awareness does not make a permanent stay on the human brain, as, with time and experience, a human connects dots of new things to older things and at the same time unlearns several anachronistic thoughts and information. This happens throughout the lifetime of a human and the more and more we know, the more we seek.
Another example will be for those who seek salvation. Since the question of human existence does not have a definite answer, a surfeit amount of people begin to meditate under the guidance and in the hope of finding answers to one’s existence. But we can’t be very sure of whether one achieves what they seek to.
At the end of the day, we are human and we will never be content with incomplete information. Since we have a brain to think, we will come up with more and more complex questions but so is the beauty of our brain. With more awareness, with more answers, come bigger and more complex questions.
"For in much wisdom is much grief: and he that increaseth knowledge increaseth sorrow."
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...water and reasons for preserving water. Whereas the fact is that only 3% of water is dr...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anachronistic thoughts and information. This happens throughout the lifetime of a hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62436548223 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47392024488 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484771573604 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.141205031 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8947368421 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347665539565 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106519284194 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16473731395 0.0758088955206 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162945285343 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16792942357 0.0667264976115 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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