Knowledge allows a person to reason and deduce things from already existing facts. Human beings collect knowledge through experience and communication, which they use in their daily life to tackle some day-to-day tasks or even some complicated unprecedented ones. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with the prompt that things become more complex and mysterious as opposing to becoming more comprehensible. Although there are some exceptions, the original claim does not hold for the following two reasons.
Knowledge enables a person to relate something that they percieved, to something that they aleady know. This could help the person to limit the amount of thinking that they would otherwise do, and help him to understand things easily. For example, a person who has aquired knowledge about how it feels to be in a relationship and the incoming obligations, may be able to quickly adjust in a relationship since things are already clear in his mind. But for a person who has been oblivious about relationship matters, it may become over-whelming initially and his life temporarily become cumbersome and complex. In other words, knowledge makes things less complex than they actually are, and helps people to deal with things easily.
Knowledge enables people to know what they didn't know before thus making things less mysterious. In other words, knowledge is a way of shedding light on things that are obscure and mysterious. For example, if a person is unknowledgable about how financing works, it is a mysterious topic for him until he learns how it operates exactly. For a person who wants to invest in stocks and simply doesn't know how financing works, it would only make his life harder. Hence, knowledge is way of knowing things and making things less myterious.
One might argue that, as we aquire knowledge, we tend to use it in places where don't need to, thus making things more complex that they really are. While this is true, things would become even more complicated without proper knowledge when dealing with things. Therefore, when dealing with things it is recommended to have relevant and sufficient knowledge for making things easy and the situation less complicated.
In conclusion, the asserion that, as we aquire knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious mostly doesn't hold.
- The following recommendation appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewell Two years ago the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel During the past two years tourism in Ocean View has increased new bu 50
- The following recommendation appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewell Two years ago the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel During the past two years tourism in Ocean View has increased new bu 60
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18897637795 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76313512414 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503937007874 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5975093659 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369149667333 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131968037086 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159789827484 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282344966499 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191272099228 0.0667264976115 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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