Acquiring Knowledge is enduring and spans whole life if someone wants to really gain something.It is not just some years for mastering in any field. Acquiring knowledge is so much compelling that anyone and at any stage of life it can be achieved. To enhance one's ability and skills perennial amount of knowledge is required.It is totally agreeable that recognizing and understanding requires a great amount of knowledge and as it increases one's ability to understand things is also increases.It is unshakably agreeable that after acquiring knowledge things become lucid rather intricate and enigmatic.
There is always more to explore.Any Topic can be greatly explored in much detail if it is obscure and not limpid.some erudite topic cannot be grasped by all people some may need to acquire some extra knowledge for that.Hardware knowledge is required for comprehend the topic home automation. Because Home automation is consist of hardware as well as software.someone with hardware knowledge can easily understand the topic and hence it becomes clearer as required data is available in the brain. It does not intricate things rather it clear how one can understand things much more detail.
knowledge is not only about data,but it is also about skills and expertise in some field. Once all set up,abstract picture of how things works transformed into detail and thorough knowledge of working. As someone knows about internal workings,it is easy to comprehend and teach other people how the big picture works within the context of small things. For instance, Working of a piston is very important for the understanding of working with an engine as a whole.As this understanding becomes clear one can see how the system works, Again it is not intricate things rather provide a complete and thorough picture of how the system as a whole is working.
Inventions evolve over time and it is perennial activity. Thomson has given first atomic model-which is in turn false-which is evolves and modified over time. After Thomson Rutherford gave model based on experiment and lastly Bohr gave the complete model. As models came into existence it clarifies how electrons are arranged into the orbit.It can be posited that whenever new or modified theory came into existence it always increase the understanding of things rather than bewildered it.
As presented arguments and exemplars, it is unequivocally and clearly agreeable that increase in knowledge clarifies the things;It is then comprehensible and easily understood by ordinary people. It does not create an enigma. So one has to acquire as much knowledge as possible because it can be used somewhere and it is not wasted.
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- Every nation should require students to study at least one foreign language from the elementary school level through the university level 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, may, really, so, then, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21759259259 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92020288277 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476851851852 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.886510529 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.588235294 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4117647059 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932936893709 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308087707277 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326658360684 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506167058005 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278533269667 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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