We usually learn much from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
Views is perception through which we judge something in our day to day activities like sports, movies, baseness of character and much more. Views also play's an important role in deciding one's future, career and effect on other's life too. No view's should be partial, as it might affect one's ability to do something or even sometimes judge's judgement in sentencing an innocent for crime which he/she never committed. Some personal view's of influencer's, reputed personalities or even politician's divide communities which might lead to chaos or riots. It is always recommended to take any decision or judgement by keeping every aspects of outcome in mind.
First is the example of Byju, the CEO and Founder of BYJU E-Learning Platform. After becoming unicorn, the CEO took decision of exponential expansion of company without taking detrimental effects into consideration. The startup started acquiring companies to form and universal e-learning platform but constantly buying companies and expansion lead to increase in debt of company from investors and to lowering the earnings. Such decision's not only affected itself but also investors lost money, employee's lost work culture and reputation of startup's acquired by it.
Second is the example of Suresh Kalmadi, ex Union Minister of India. Mr Kalmadi scammed Indian citizen's in commonwealth games which was held near 2010. He scammed people by approving budget at extremely inflated rate and eventually giving contracts to his loved one's which eventually lead to use of poor quality products. Appropriate use of money for his own purpose other than the required like helping poor child in getting education, giving free grains to poor families and much more.
Third is the example of MasaYoshi San, CEO and Founder of SoftBank. Mr San was once richest person but due to some circumstances his previous company suffered heavy loss and became bankrupt. Mr San was fully motivated and learned lesson's which helped him in starting new venture named as Soft Bank which his colleagues. Not only he raised from bottom once again but he is event helping new startup's in solving problems, and grabbing chair of unicorn place.
I do partially agree with the statement that we usually learn much from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own. It totally depends on the matter on which view's are being presented, how it is going to affect other in their daily life and most importantly its deleterious effect.
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| 2023-12-02 | kristen_vo | 75 | view |
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- Some people believe that corporations have responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environment in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within law is to make as much as p 50
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people 66
- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals 58
- When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of old historic buildings 66
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...lso plays an important role in deciding ones future, career and effect on others lif...
^^^^
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...iding ones future, career and effect on others life too. No views should be partial, a...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s should be partial, as it might affect ones ability to do something or even sometim...
^^^^
Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended taking'.
Suggestion: recommended taking
...ht lead to chaos or riots. It is always recommended to take any decision or judgement by keeping ev...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15594059406 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66509913634 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0268166057 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.631578947 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29488549071 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766978650748 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187945340582 0.0758088955206 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178521433061 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232853139123 0.0667264976115 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...lso plays an important role in deciding ones future, career and effect on others lif...
^^^^
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...iding ones future, career and effect on others life too. No views should be partial, a...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s should be partial, as it might affect ones ability to do something or even sometim...
^^^^
Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended taking'.
Suggestion: recommended taking
...ht lead to chaos or riots. It is always recommended to take any decision or judgement by keeping ev...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15594059406 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66509913634 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0268166057 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.631578947 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29488549071 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766978650748 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187945340582 0.0758088955206 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178521433061 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232853139123 0.0667264976115 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.