When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings.
The stated issue is quite subjective in nature and needs critical evaluation before coming at a definite conclusion. It is a contentious issue whether a historic building should be destroyed and make space for the modern buildings which can be of greater use in this world which is moving so hungrily for the space for development, generating more and more profit.
The categorization of building is quintessential in this issue as the building is a an ancient monument, a prehistoric structure, a historic place of worship like a temple, mosque or the church or a very dilapidated building. Hence the view of the archaeological department is of significant importance and only after a rigorous research , the planner should arrive a decisive conclusion if the building can be demolished for the new development.
A modern planner cannot have a final say in these matters because for him , it is only the present day context of developing a city but on the intelligent opinion and research of the the archaeological department of the city, the modern planner can have a more intelligent and inclusive design for the city. If the planner understands the aspect of the prehistoric building, he/she can plan in a more efficient manner where the city can be developed in a modern futuristic outlook while also preserving the cultural integrity of the city.
Keeping the cultural outlook of the city intact can be greatly beneficial in generating billion of dollars in revenue as it boosts tourism both domestically and internationally. Millions of tourists throng the cities of Europe to have a glimpse of the Renaissance building, churches, arts and architecture. It was possible only due to the futuristic outlook of the planners of the various cities of Europe. Vatican City is of utmost importance in the world of tourism only due to the preserved arts and architecture like the Saint Peter's basilica which every tourist dreams to have glimpse.
The other classical example can be the world renowned and historic temples of India- the Meenakshi Temple, Jain Dilwara Temple, Sun Temple of Konark in Orissa, which helps us to have a glimpse of the past rich and glorious culture of India where arts and architecture was greatly promoted by the rulers of the time.
However, it cannot be ruled out that the modern cities are lacking for space and hence any space for development is very lucrative for the designers and planners to grab that space for development. The old dilapidated building which dont hold a lot of significance in history can be given way for the modern development. It is considered futile to waste a significant amount of money of the government in its preservation if the building is redundant and insignificant.
Hence, it can be reasonably concluded that the historic building are of great significance in promoting tourism, generating a significant revenue for the government. The modern planners must rope in the advice of the archaelogical department of the city before arriving at a decision whether to demolish a building or not. It is only the all inclusive design of the city which should be promoted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06358381503 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05766651729 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441233140655 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 850.5 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4824039472 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.588235294 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5294117647 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303556622829 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102926787551 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798710685227 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161421036391 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861543378309 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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