This is a very generalised statement that Government should put their entire resources in solving the immediate pressing needs of the country rather than the anticipated problems of the future. I agree to the fact that the government should focus on the urgent pressing needs of the nation. However, a futuristic approach should never be negated.
The third world countries like Somalia, Afghanistan is suffering from the militancy crisis since decades. Hence the need of the hour is political stability rather than the investment in the space research. People are fighting over the basis needs- food , clothing and shelter. In this case the governments primary focus should be to bring a political stability and attract the investments which may further boost the economic stability.
In addition, in countries like India and China which has a burgeoning population, there is a dire need for the housing for all and food for feeding the nation. The governments should focus to provide for these pressing needs but the investments in research like genetic engineering can greatly increase the agriculture yields. They have the responsibility to invest in the housing projects through the PPP ( Public Private Partnership) model if there is any paucity of funds with the government. Further, the government can enact the law of compulsory donations through the Corporate Social responsibility , so that they can garner the support of the corporate entities in these goals.
The developing nations such as India, china and South Africa can have a liberal approach where they can allocate some of the resources for the research in the areas which can have an impact in the future. Some may argue that all the nations are still struggling to feed the poor citizens of their country both the times then why allocate any resource for the anticipated problem? This may restrict the futuristic vision of the nation. The tremendous money invested in the satellites launched by ISRO ( Indian Space and Research Organsiation) may have been considered to be a waste at one point of time, however they have helped in a number of ways which is beneficial to the entire world. With the help of satellites, the scientists can correctly predict the pattern of rainfall which is greatly beneficial to India, a nations heavily dependent on agriculture.
Further, the bullet trains which may seem to be a luxury in the developing nations but it can severely reduce the congestion in the traffic in the heavily populated cities like Mumbai, Shanghai, Delhi. It can become an effective means of the public transport if the fares can be properly regulated by the government.
In the end, it can be concluded that Government should put their primary focus in solving the urgent and immediate pressing needs of the nation but should not have the myopic vision for the future. They should also allocate some of the funds and resources to address the anticipated problems because the anticipated problems of today can become the pressing problems of tomorrow.
Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
This is a very generalised statement that Government should put their entire resources in solving the immediate pressing needs of the country rather than the anticipated problems of the future. I agree to the fact that the government should focus on the urgent pressing needs of the nation. However, a futuristic approach should never be negated.
The third world countries like Somalia, Afghanistan is suffering from the militancy crisis since decades. Hence the need of the hour is political stability rather than the investment in the space research. People are fighting over the basis needs- food , clothing and shelter. In this case the governments primary focus should be to bring a political stability and attract the investments which may further boost the economic stability.
In addition, in countries like India and China which has a burgeoning population, there is a dire need for the housing for all and food for feeding the nation. The governments should focus to provide for these pressing needs but the investments in research like genetic engineering can greatly increase the agriculture yields. They have the responsibility to invest in the housing projects through the PPP ( Public Private Partnership) model if there is any paucity of funds with the government. Further, the government can enact the law of compulsory donations through the Corporate Social responsibility , so that they can garner the support of the corporate entities in these goals.
The developing nations such as India, china and South Africa can have a liberal approach where they can allocate some of the resources for the research in the areas which can have an impact in the future. Some may argue that all the nations are still struggling to feed the poor citizens of their country both the times then why allocate any resource for the anticipated problem? This may restrict the futuristic vision of the nation. The tremendous money invested in the satellites launched by ISRO ( Indian Space and Research Organsiation) may have been considered to be a waste at one point of time, however they have helped in a number of ways which is beneficial to the entire world. With the help of satellites, the scientists can correctly predict the pattern of rainfall which is greatly beneficial to India, a nations heavily dependent on agriculture.
Further, the bullet trains which may seem to be a luxury in the developing nations but it can severely reduce the congestion in the traffic in the heavily populated cities like Mumbai, Shanghai, Delhi. It can become an effective means of the public transport if the fares can be properly regulated by the government.
In the end, it can be concluded that Government should put their primary focus in solving the urgent and immediate pressing needs of the nation but should not have the myopic vision for the future. They should also allocate some of the funds and resources to address the anticipated problems because the anticipated problems of today can become the pressing problems of tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... are fighting over the basis needs- food , clothing and shelter. In this case the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the housing projects through the PPP Public Private Partnership model if ther...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ough the Corporate Social responsibility , so that they can garner the support of ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...iberal approach where they can allocate some of the resources for the research in the areas...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... have an impact in the future. Some may argue that all the nations are still struggli...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...f ways which is beneficial to the entire world. With the help of satellites, the ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Suggestion: some
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... pressing problems of tomorrow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, third, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14516129032 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74545214119 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45564516129 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6794886339 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380527189784 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135699074447 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203570581391 0.0758088955206 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263036340303 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.279605054996 0.0667264976115 419% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.