Today is the age of social media, the internet, and fame. Youngsters, today, are more inclined towards being social media influencers, actors, and artists which results in quick fame and recognition. While it is not wrong to pursue these careers, it has some side effects. I, therefore, strongly agree with the prompt that young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals.
Youngsters are easily influenced by social media to gain short-term fame and recognition, which makes them feel superior among their friends. For instance, during Covid, young people started creating short videos on social media sites like Instagram and TikTok. Some of them did really well and gained a lot of popularity and fame in a very short period. Youngsters, easily influenced by this, started creating videos on social media. However, this fame later faded away with time, so those who pursued it as a career or long-term plan got significantly affected by it.
Whereas, someone who has a clear long-term and realistic goal would stick to it and work towards achieving it by persevering. For instance, Prime Minister Narendra Modi of India, worked at a tea stall when he was young. But he had the goal of making India prosperous in some way. He worked towards his long-term goal and now today he is in a position where he can easily make changes for the betterment of India. Therefore, if one works towards his goal hard enough, he will definitely achieve it.
Moreover, short-term goals and greed for fame and recognition can also lead us to corrupt paths. For instance, there have been many cases recently that came out of social media influencers, actors who bought their followers and subscribers to be better than their counterparts and earn better than them. These malpractices used to succeed cannot lead actually lead to any success but only to punishments.
Encouraging youngsters for long-term, realistic goals instills in them various qualities like perseverance, hard work, importance of failure, and therefore makes them more developed for the real world rather than living in a bubble of fame and recognition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15804597701 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71705241529 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5597824247 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311062545545 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926348220463 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943750554429 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171932248976 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668224842869 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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