The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females getting post-school qualifications at various levels in Australia, in 1999. It can clearly be seen that, there are substantial differences at education levels of people in terms of gender.
The first glance at the chart reveals that women considerably lagged behind of men at getting skilled vocational diplomas (10% vs. 90%) in contrary, the amount of females with undergraduate certificates (70%) was significantly more in comparison with males holding them (30%). Furthermore, the number of bachelor’s degree holder women was marginal...
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