Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do yo u agree with this statement?
With the advent of globalization it is seen that countries are spending a lot of money on arts and music recently. Some people consider it as a waste of resources ,while some people think it is crucial for development of country. This essay will describe both aspects of this argument.
On one side people believe that this is waste of money . they think this money should be used to improve public services . for example health and basic education are more precious than art. There should be more funds for easy availability and affordability of these services to everyone. In their opi...
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No. of Different Words: 136 200
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Characters: 1401 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.882 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.729 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.581 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5