Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do yo u agree with this statement?
With the advent of globalization it is seen that countries are spending a lot of money on arts and music recently. Some people consider it as a waste of resources ,while some people think it is crucial for development of country. This essay will describe both aspects of this argument.
On one side people believe that this is waste of money . they think this money should be used to improve public services . for example health and basic education are more precious than art. There should be more funds for easy availability and affordability of these services to everyone. In their opi...
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